Oh man! does this have a sequel?

Wow.

Short, bittersweet and very effective. Poor Hermione, and to a much lesser extent, poor Snape.

Short, bittersweet and very effective. Poor Hermione, and to a much lesser extent, poor Snape.

Love this story .. u should write a sequel. Snape wanting her back

Very good. Impressed.

loved this so much, it felt very authentic to me, I don't typically like a lot of marriage law stuff because it all becomes too cheesy, but I honestly think most of them would end up a bit sad and depressing like this

Solid fic. Thanks for sharing. Strong willed Hermione and weak resolve Snape. Interesting combo. Haven't read it before.

This was good. Not happy, as you said, but truly good.

I like this story. I like it to the the extent that I have actually re-read it, and I think I shall do so, yet again, in the future.

In fact, I think this is the story that made me want to "favorite" you as an author. I liked your other stories, but something about this one shone more than the rest. It's very warm. The emotions emanating from it are so strong that, even if they are normally considered cold, the story feels warm to me. Of course, I always like a well crafted and premised oneshot. One like this that pleases my own sensibilities and has actual substance jettison a gem. I'd like to seem more of them from you Ramos, for you are a good story teller.

Wow. It wasn't a feel-good story in the slightest. To be honest, a good portion of it made me feel sick - or at best, numb.

And that's what's so great about it.

You were brave enough as an author to tackle really difficult, gritty subject matter - and NOT romanticize it! (vs. what almost everyone else does, intentionally or by mistake)

This made me realize what a marriage law would realistically look like between Snape and Hermione - and it's not pretty.

I like this fic. I really do. It's different than most "Now that we got married we're in LOVE" fics.

Snape was quite mean in this fic! Good job on making him an unattractive jerk. Hermione's emotions were excellent, her detachment and calm, and ruthlessness. Very well written, as usual.

LMAO, loved it!

Smart and well constructed, even if it's not filled with peaches and cream I quite liked it.