Reviews for The Best Birthday Present
Guest chapter 4 . 2/24
I love this kickass Harry! Dumbles and his Order will eat their words haha!
Ilena Petrova chapter 7 . 7/6/2019
Sad that you seem to have abandoned this story
Charlie0925 chapter 7 . 6/19/2019
I do hope that you are ok as you haven't updated in years. Also wanted to say that this is a truly brilliant read and I'm so glad that I found it! ;o)
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2019
Really hate Dumbledore's condescending attitude. Also hate how every is simply pushing Harry to the side even though they know that he defeated Voldemort in the alternate universe.
Is every character written in this story totally stupid or what.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/17/2019
What up with him asking for forgiveness after every second sentence. Jesus, how can a man who defeated Voldemort be such a pussy. Fuck weak protagonists.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2019
So what, his gut feeling told him that he could trust these people and he spilled all of his secrets like a naive little boy. How utterly disappointing. I hope the story gets better from here on out otherwise I would have to drop it.
csheila chapter 2 . 4/21/2019
Good job with the realistic reactions.
Mike Lu chapter 1 . 4/13/2019
The last chap was annoying.
jmw03u chapter 7 . 12/14/2018
I really like this story. It feels like a great start to an epic story. If you choose to continue it I would love to read more! Thank you for writing it.
Azure Shine chapter 5 . 11/27/2018
snape died?! nooooo! *cries*
Azure Shine chapter 5 . 11/27/2018
ahhhh! snape should be not traitor! dont change the canon pleasee *cries*
Azure Shine chapter 3 . 11/27/2018
isnt Hedwig already died before Voldemort died?
Guest chapter 7 . 10/21/2018
Barely using the time travel and family to create any significant scenes between them at all. Not a single decent character in the story - they're all gigantic twits. Especially the ones from the new universe. Bland dialogue, lacking emotions, faulty logic all around, etc. etc.

Poor piece of work overall.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/21/2018
"Oh I so wish my little boy was here and alive!"

Then when he arrives, not as much as a hug. Even confirms it is him - still zero emotions. It's just poor writing.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/21/2018
Every single one of your characters are annoying as all hell.
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