Hey. As far as I'm concerned, even without the lemon, this is by far and away the greatest Sly Cooper and Carmelita story I have ever read or will ever have the pleasure of reading.

Amazing

Good

Perhaps you should watch "Law and Order: Special Victims Unit" sometime, or the later part of Season One of Sword Art Online. I want to be tactful, but honesty demands that I tell it like it is: Cooper sounded, literally, just like a molester, right down to some of the exact phrasing he used. This isn't a romance story; it's sexual connivance and manipulation masquerading as romance.

I've seen other stories of yours; I know you don't have to stoop to garbage like this.

Bummer I like descriptive lemons I could give you some pointers

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next

I think you did just fine and btw this is one of my favorite stories of all times

That is better but next time be more descriptive about the sex

What the fuck was that there was no sex

Beutiful.

*sniff* so beautiful!

You know how to fucking type bro! I love your writing style, the grammar, and the words you used for both chapters!

Very, VERY well written. I'm a big fan of Sly Cooper and I found this perfect. The dialogue fits in brilliantly and its as if I can almost picture what's happening. I give it 10 horny Slys out of 10!

Please see my review on Ebalawn JFR's "Nuit de Passion", this author seems to have "stolen" your work so I wanted you to know it. When I have time I'll make sure to make a true review out of your wonderful story, for now please go and check the stuff. ;)

that was an awesome story! loved it!