| Reviews for When choosing becomes a huge problem |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 7/19/2018 Mary sue OC |
| Guest chapter 6 . 10/11/2013 Not a bad story, it's good! Kind of well written! May I make some suggestions that I hope will help your story. Use your spell-check on your computer, it helps a lot! Make Kimiko older, at least about the same age as Katara(between 14-15) . Also, she would not be carrying an id card(they didn't have them back then), she would have fire bending scrolls or books on whatever she wanted to learn(healing, fighting, etc.) on her besides clothes and money and food. Someone with a desire to learn would be very mature, not childish. Her fighting ability may get Zuko attention but it how she acts, carrys herself that will win him. Make her very beautiful and caring and someone who puts other people first. Keep up-dating, its a good story! |
 Intrigued Dreams chapter 6 . 8/2/2008 i love this story its sounds awesome. i can't wait tosee what's next. |
| CallXMeXLight chapter 6 . 1/5/2007 cool i like it update soon |
| taangrules1212 chapter 5 . 7/1/2006 aw u shoulg have told us what happened! |
| rileyXP chapter 4 . 4/22/2006 OH GOD! This is so funny! I love Zuko! Plz update soon! |
| rileyXP chapter 3 . 4/6/2006 Oh please, please, please, please, update soon! |
| Faunn chapter 2 . 3/19/2006 Very cute! I like it! write more! |
| rileyXP chapter 2 . 3/7/2006 I love it! Plz update soon! |
| Air Bending Dragon35 chapter 2 . 3/3/2006 Great story! I can not wait read the next chapter! ;-) |
| Air Bending Dragon35 chapter 1 . 2/24/2006 I really like the story so far,please keep going |
| saltpeppersugar chapter 1 . 2/24/2006 I like your story, it good and the way she faught them by herself awesome. Update soon please |
| i love athrun chapter 1 . 2/24/2006 IT WAS SO GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER! |
