OH MY GOODNESS! This was like the most perfect little romance ever. What a cute idea, very original. And the execution was top notch. While it could have been longer and more detailed it didn’t *need* to be to feel complete, and that is no small feat to keep something brief without feeling spare or rushed. The last line was perfection, too. Like a bow on top. Just an excellent romance and one that made my evening to read.

Aww! This is so cute! I wish it was longer! I would love to read the extension of Mamoru pursuing and courting Usagi before Usagi run away for misunderstanding Keiko/Mamo. I love this! Thank you for writing!

Very cute!

What a wonderful & sweet one-shot! I really liked the plot. Thank you for sharing!

SOOO MUCH CUTENESS! :D

Estuvo precioso, felicidades.

SUPER CUTE! I like the conversations between Motoki and Mamoru. lol. such cute gentlemen.

haha loved the story, it was so sweet! I especially like the last line:

"Damn it, Mamoru! You stole my secretary after all!"

LOVED IT !

:-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-) ~ :-)

i like your story...maybe you can add the wedding scene

AWWWWW that was sooooooooooooo cute a little "fluffy" at some points but I enjoyed a lot.

Thank you ,

Arabella

Hmmm... I liked it. I did, but I have to say the intention was better than the execution. Good premise. However, you rushed it. This story definitely cant work as a one shot. They didnt really fall in love... It seemed REALLY forced when that happened. Funny, well written, but very very rushed if you want my personal opinion (probably not). Haha, nicely done either way.

funny and adorable, i love stories like this! theyre sweet and short-ish, and I just love motoki, i like him in alot of fanfics, but this is just so cute

I loved it, and personally i laughed some of the times. Thanks for writing it.

Hahahahahahahahah that is hilarious. I loved the ending!