I wish London’s defeat of Voldemort would have been written, but at the same time I am satisfied with how the story has been left.
While I normally hate Severus/Harry romantic pairing and normally only stick to reading mentor or father/son pairings between these two, this version of Harry and Severus actually stole my heart. Certain aspects of the story are only appropriate in my mind because it is fan fiction (the relationship starting when London was 14), but I enjoyed the development their relationship/bonding went through over the several year time span.

This is such a great story! I like how London and Severus have bonded. I like how bad-ass London is, while not being perfect. You did a great job of making him powerful without making him Super!Harry. Thank you for writing this.

Yay! I'm glad that London and Sev have discussed things. I love soul bonds and I love that theirs has strengthened and grown over the years even if Severus did know instantly. I wish that London could do more or be there more for Ana. I doubt she could be in the wizarding world but he has so much money, he could help set her up with a safe house.

I actually really like the change in their dynamic. You write Severus as a sub pretty well and explain that change and how Severus thought his partner would be older since he's the sub. I'm glad Severus learned the truth about London's reading ability. That did take a long time to come about but I like how you developed London trying especially with Sirius pulling his head out of his ass. I thought for sure it'd be the last battle with Voldie. That maybe it was Voldie in the back of the hospital battling Severus trying to exact revenge of Severus for defecting. and that London would just casually wipe him out.
Thank you for writing.

I thought that Severus would not be able to find London and wouldn't see him again until London was discovered by the Order.

YALL ARE GOING TO JAILLLL

I hope that you come back one day and finish this! I loved reading this story and I can't bear it having it abandoned! This is so well written and has an awesome alternative storyline!

I lived this! I would love to have been able to read the rest of it but I hope you are doing well and living your life to the fullest. I've really enjoyed many of your stories so far and hope to continue reading them! You do a wonderful job with your characters and stories lines!

Plz Plz Update i love the story m

London, there's a MUGGLE on my rug...
I loved it.

Long. But worth the read. I began this at 9 it is now 2:30 am the next day.
I need to sleep.

I started this story at 9pm. Bad idea. It is now... 1 am... I need sleep I say as I turn the page...
Loved it.

I want to be like Sally from Charlie brown: Aren't they just the cutest thing?
I mean!

Luna!

I LOVED it. AMAZING.

Does London have Dyslexia?
Loved it