Wow, what a fantastic story.

The philosophical beginning enticed me into the fictional world you created around the main character. Your story was so emotionally deep and bittersweet… You are a truly brilliant writer.

As I usually do, I read the reviews before reading the story and was aware that it was a Sark/Sloane story. Thank god I had some pre-warning… Cause if I would have been severely distressed by the end, thinking all along it was a Sarkney.

When Sark let Slone know that he knew about the wine being poisoned, it felt like my heart was being torn out. What a beautiful piece of work.

Well done.

Lisa :)

umm, what? wow...that was weird. good, but weird. really good job.

i wonder if i should go gouge out my eyes or something right now. but good writing though. except eew! ya know?

AUGH! I think I just became a Sark/Sloane 'shipper! This fic was so good! Dang it! no! You tricked me...I thought it was a Sarkney...(runs off screaming into the distance)

wow, i thought it was sydney not arvin... good job!