What?!

NOOOOOOOOOOOO BLAISEEEE YOU CANT DIE

I got to the end of this page and decided to stop reading... it makes no sense that you have made hermione out to be a weakling.. She is a strong women in other fanfiction and the movie.. She could of went to someone and said what was happening.. either way it was blah..

Why did Blaise have to die, I started crying?

Saddest thing ever I The whole time I read it

This could have good premises and has a good beginning but I see it quickly turning the wrong way into a hormone story with little to no substance behind it.

It's like eating fast food and calling it healthy.

"Welcome Granger I am your Google Robotic Guide. We will replace all humans using Google Plus with self sustaining cites that are eco friendly and take care of the planet where nothing can go wrong...wrong...wrong...wrong...

Thanks for at least being honest in your summary that you will still be biased to Gryffindor just like JK Rowling who shoe horns other houses.

A lot of fics advertise changes and twists but then backs off when there could possibly be good/funny changes in order to 'stay true to canon' which as I pointed out is biased to begin with.

This plot device makes even less sense than the forced marriage law plot.

blaizey don't die (sob sob)

Oh good why end it here.

God Ron is an idiot.

I really am starting to dislike mcgonagal, she's the one who put Hermione in there.

Like I said I want to murder every angle slytherin in this book.

God I am starting to hate every slytherin , even blaize mainly because he won't stop malfoy.