Amazing! Please finish! :-)

...Abandoned?

Oops.

It was one of the more novel approaches to a rather clichéd trope, but I have to say, your new stuff is so much better than this that I'm okay with it sitting unfinished.

Really, really, REALLY bad place to break this off. And it's been ... geez, FIVE YEARS since you updated. That pretty much guarantees it as 'abandoned', and that's a damn shame. I want to get to know Kimmer better.

I really liked it so far so can you please cointinue.

lemme guess, since you havent updated this story in over a year, you dont plan on continuing it...that really sucks cuz this is a great story

Ooh, this is cool. One thing that I have to say I really like is your description of how Raven, Jinx, and even Beast Boy's powers work, in a way most people don't. Yeah, that sounds weird, but what I mean is- explaining out Raven's empathy, how she can sense Jinx, and vice versa, even if Jinx isn't technically an empath. Also, with Beast Boy- explaining how he can smell things- god, that was cool, and I've never seen that before.

As for the actual story- I haven't seen too many stories featuring Raven and Jinx that weren't a yuri or them somehow becoming friends- of course, this may inevitably turn into either of those, I don't know- and I can tell that, in all your writing, you have a knack for originality. Kimmer is a cool character, as well. Not a Mary Sue, as so very many OCs often are. An interesting blend of Raven and Jinx- I've often wondered how powerful some superheroes could be if they possessed the powers of several already established heroes at once.

Anyway, please update soon if you get the inspiration.

awesome! i can tell this is gonna be really good (mostly cause it already is). i hope you keep up the great writing .

Ooh could be the two rivals work together in this fic.

Wow another great chapter! I am curious as to what Kimmer is going to do,but then again we shall find out soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like the premise. Love how descriptive you are in the actions. Really looking forward to the rest of this story.

So, they've caught on. Very good descriptive writing on their fight. That Kimmer seemed to be getting very... excited watching them.

'Shadowstep' That's a cool name for Raven's ability. I'll remember that.

Um, for starters, in chapter 3, at the bottom, it said, "Author's Note:," and you didn't even write anything there. Anyway, i wonder how Kimmer is going to make her entrance. I also wonder how Jinx and Raven would act. Are you really going to have a CYxRAE pair?

Hm...interesting! I like, update when you can. I can't wait to read more!

Okay, this girl seems determined to get under Raven and Jynx's skin. But for what purpose? Is she just doing it for fun, or is this part of a bigger plan?

Do I detect a possible love triangle invovling Jinx, Cyborg, and Raven? Oh I can't wait for the cat fight between the two magic users.