An incredibly poignant story and worthy of a lot more reviews. Well done!

oooo this was fabulous!

Hauntingly every bit of it! I think you are a great writer, I m reading everything!:-) x

Dammit, I'm going to kill whoever's cutting onions right now

The last of this tale is still flashing around behind my eyes. The memory of this is sure to linger for some time. In so few words, you have displayed incredible skill in thoroughly developing the characters and their story. The authenticity of their reactions and dialogue in this beautifully haunting and emotionally vivid setting was well balanced and wonderful to read—despite the constant, painful clenching of my heart. It is writing like this that inspires and moves people, be it in dreaming or in the labors of life. For me, the profound depth of love, faith, and forgiveness is what lent a timelessness to this tale. You have a gift—one I am sincerely glad you have shared. Write on. —Alex

Absolutely beautiful.

Wow, you certainly have a way with words. This story was really beautiful... I hope to read more of your Laby fics soon! They're some of the best on this site :)

p.s : was that a Peter Pan reference in there? ;)

That was great.

This was beautiful. God it takes alot for me to cry and i'm crying my eyes out!

Bittersweet, but oh so lovely. It was very moving and well written, I enjoyed reading it. _ A nice twist, to have someone different sitting on the throne, despite how that may have come around. I haven't read one yet (besides your God Save The King story) where someone other then Jareth sits on it. ::shrugs:: I'm rambling, sorry... _ ::waves:: Blessed Be hun!

This story was so sad, but in a good way. Not all stories can have a traditional happy endind. They did get thier eternity together, just not in the way they had hoped for. Awesome story!

Holy shit.

What a story.

That was short, sweet, and beautiful. I'd count this fic as a work of art. Unique, imaginative, and well crafted. Best half-hour I have spent on this site in a long time. It's so nice to read pieces that actually make you think a little, beyond the repetitive crap I've been trolling through looking for little gems like these. I can see myself reading this story again in the near future.

Great job!

Dear God.

I am crying.

I JUST finished the last line.

You are amazing.

And this story has touched me very deeply.

Thank you for such a wonderful fanfic.

Wow... and what will the neibors and everyone else think of the car left in the driveway with no one to pick it up or in the house? Vanished owners? How very... appropriate, for the house.

Very beautiful fic, by the way. It's very magnificent. And poor Sarah. She was ment to be the Goblin Queen, standing alongside Jareth, and now she and Jareth are in the Summerlands. Very beautiful.

CT

well done once again.. although i'm running out of stories that you have written. :)