You should write a story about you and I. Lol. I know you want to. Lovely.

Very beautiful story!

Someone has been stealing from 'A walk to remember', but it's good though.

I remember reading this a long time ago, and now thanksgiving break is near (free time from college) so I am searching if anyone ever updated their story. Thank you for updating. AND YES DO WRITE MORE, YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER AND STORY TELLER SO DON'T QUITE ;)

Best,

Nancy

Hi! This seems like it'll be an interesting story! I can't believe I am JUST finding it, seeing as you started it a few years ago. Well, anyway, I know you started this story in -what was it? - 2006, but I'm going to touch on this fact (just in case it's continued in later chapters): You keep changing tense. For example, the first line had "she was so happy to be back home at the burrow even though she only had two more day's till she goes back to Hogwarts."

For that to be correct, it would be "two more days til she went (OR 'would go') back to Hogwarts."

Also, I noticed that you missed periods a lot during dialogue. You did good when a character was exclaiming or asking questions, but you need those periods. And commas! You missed A LOT of commas.

Well, like I said, this first chapter was posted years ago, but it's never too late to point out mistakes. You never know when you want to go back and edit an old chapter just to make it better for future readers, you know? I'm going to keep reading the story so I can see how your writing changed from the start in 2006 to the end in 2011! :)

Happy writing!

~Aiya~

you about made me cry! I feel so sorry for Ginny and Draco but this story is so intersting!

~Dark Jasmine

Ugh! I hate cheerleading...you made them sound like sluts! Well...that is what cheerleaders ussually are...so Go Girl!

*falls off chair laughing* so funny! *laughs hysterically*...*tries to calm down and get back on bed*...*rereads the last few lines and falls of bed laughing again* HILARIOUS!

~Dark Jasmine

i HATE mr and mrs. weasley in this story...they're just cold...but i LOVE the story itself...just not those characters...hehehe i am going to read more now

~Dark jasmine (snake rings are awesome!)

Wait so let me get this straight? Lucious RAPED Narcissa? And made Draco watch...*shudders* harsh...

~Dark Jasmine (even the sweetest thingz can lure you into evil)

Why would malfoy help Ginny? Oh no...i don't get it...is it like is she? i don't know...it depends on how you show Draco...i wonder if he's going to be a womanizing git? hm...i'll keep reading...because this story is AWESOME!

~DArk Jasmine (and my name is not Jasmine but i used it because Jasmine is a flower and dark jasmine is like a dark flower!)

Cant wait till chapter 24 love this story

Last time I checked, Deatheaters didn't use Muggle weapons and the twins didn't slap people on the back, but other than that, great chapter

Did anyone else find the line : “Oh wow, did she see me sleep with Draco?” really funny?

No, just me, oh well, I am officially a freak.

Just to let you know, in Britain, the currency is the British Pound, and 280 dollars (american) would be roughly 150 pounds sterling.