please say u are going to post the rewrite i loved the first and would love to read the new one

I really wish you'd put it back up as was.

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my only complaints with this story are Tomoe being an Uzumaki would more likely have red hair as they are famous for and What happened to Kushina?

What are you talking about! I love it! So into the story!
Thank you for the chapter and for making it!

The letter was a bit confusing and it didn't really make sense. :) If you'd edit it, that would be great. It would be much easier to understand if you did edit it.

:( I dont like how this story is leading NOWHERE at chapter 9 already. You're just repeating the same thing in the orginal story of naruto. Plus, i hate how Naruto is the weak one and takes sakura's stupid role. -_- Screaming like an idiot when a sword is about to hit her? Yeah, sounds like Sakura. I just dont like how you make her the weak one that's pretty much useless in the team. Sorry, i know that it's pretty rude to say all of this, but it's just my opinion. And, if you don't like my opinion just ignore it, kay? I just had to get this out. I mean, she's supposed to be strong and protect her brother right? Well, she's not protecting him. She's just screaming and doing nothing. It pisses me off. -.-

I don't like how there are 2 narutos in this story..lol, and naruto (girl) is supposed to be the MAIN character, right? But i feel like mitsuo is the main character in this story...

UGH! I WISH I knew about this story before so I could vote for the pairings sooner! Ugh, I just love you story and REALLY truly love it! I just hate the fact that I didn't find it sooner! :'( But I'm gonna vote for Itachi/Haku (You know, like polar oppositesfinding love together? "Fire and íce! Like Venus and Mars!") I reckon Neji/Gaara would be a hot couple, seriously, I just reckon that two "cursed" people could fins wuv together forever! :D and finally Lee/Tenten because... I reckon that since they've been on the same team, Ten could really understand and handle Lee? Does that make sense? I don't know...
Anyways, I'm probaly too late but I wanted to say it :D
LoVe ThE fIc! KeEp WrItInG! CoZ yOu GoTz ThE tAlEnT! :D
GirlYouDontKnow aka FreshGurl

You jerk you made me cry

I love this. You did a great job. Thank you for this.

Naruto got the curse just like i thought XD

Hey, I really enjoyed reading your fic. Awesome story... It was a nice idea of giving kyubi to mitshu n naruto with tenshi... Otherwise it would been too exaggerate to have all power in one person...
Good work!
N I really loved sasuke... The way you showed him. Strong, kind, loving... In his own way.

wow! cool story

I tried to read this, its why I carried on to the third chapter. After reading the reviews, I had some hope that it would be good, and what I've read so far puts the quality at higher then at least 2/3rds of the fics on this site. I suppose the reason I can't continue is the fact that no matter what you call her, Naruto is not Naruto without the Kyuubi. This is just an OC that you've put the name of 'Naruto' on. I would go so far as to say 'Mitsuo' is the real Naruto and his sister is the OC.

Its just weird. I think I would have stayed with this story had you kept Kyuubi where it should have been and then introduced Naruto's twin brother, I would have enjoyed that.

But nevermind, thats my opinion and going by the number of faves, a lot of people love this story for what it is. Congratulations on finishing it too! Thats not an easy endeavour.