like wows,

update!

This is a wonderful story. When i was reading the part where edward was changing her i belived that he had goten hungry instead of him intending to change her. Also i can't believe renee tried to kill herself. Lastly i was scared that the cullens scret was going to come out when mike and the others read bella's diary. Good thing jacob showed up, though reading that diary is going to be very painful for him.

i people i love the story so far but i think that it would be more understand able if you were to type in bigger letters that it changes from like edward point of view and bellas but other then that i just love it and im totally hooked and even after this book is done i really believe that you guys should write another and many more storys together cause you guys working together help make some awesome writing! :D

Update! I'm reviewing, and I think this story is sweet, and very romantic. Now update already!

Oh sara... there's nothing better than updating after a forever wait. (pfft) Trust me, don't feel so guilty. i'm in the same position as you. And, most other authors. Just read the author's note at the beginning of each chapter of people's stories! they usually consist of apologies, angry thrashes at flamers, and begs for reviews. ah, the cliches. ]

Nobody hates a little smex. ] now i feel like writing a little fluffy one-shot. would you like to help? message me via facebook. ;]

wow. really good chapter. it was really, really, really, sweet. i can't wait for the next chaptet, please update soon. :)

I feel like an idiot! The really long review from the account IWantToDeleteThis is me haha... That's a realy old account and my email and password are the same as that one when I log into Fictionpress, so I guess in my sleep deprived state I got confused! Anywho, still loved the chappie, just wanted to clear some confusion. Now I shall go delete that account XD

-Laura

Wow... Your update was one thing I did not expect to see! I almost fell out of my office chair ] I am so glad you found the right time to update! Trust me, I understand the having a lot going on thing, I haven't updated my fic in over a year. But I'm so happy you updated! I don't know why I stopped leaving you reviews (I was Your Gothic Lullaby) I've read every single chapter as you've posted them. Thank godness for this fic. I love that your fic was one of the very first ones under Twilight fanfiction. I really only like to read those anymore. Everything else is lacking in originality!

Anyway, I'll actually get to talking about your chapter. I really love it! After the last few days I've had, and the few days ahead of me I'm dreading, it's nice to read somewhat lightheared fluff. I'm super happy you updated, and I hope -cough- you better -cough- update and finish your story (I'm one to talk XD)

Awesome chapter, can't wait for more ]

-Laura

O.K. So this has been a really exciting story! I read all of it in one day and I am ready for another chapter already! Please update soon! And thank you in advance!

That was sweet!Don't feel horrible,I haven't updated in a while either. .

omg this is the most exciting pages iv ever read. there really insperational, you made me cry, build anger its a great feeling that authors such as yourself can do that. and i cant wait to see what happens next thanks alot:). i want to know more like what is jacob going to do is it going to turn out in a war?. and what will happen to renee? and when will bella ever be like the cullens (meaning not drinking human blood?). thank you x

hannah.

I love your story. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.

AWW that was SOO sweet

update soon D

-Miss Moofy

I completely as much time as you need.

Great Story so Far! Please write more!