So this takes place in the 2003 anime? I wasn't clear until the bit about Sloth being a she. I'm watching Brotherhood, but I do plan to get to the original.
This is looking to be an interesting start. I like your writing style.

Great plot and chapter

Damnit! I was getting so into this! I just discovered it recently and read straight through in (almost) one sitting! If this never gets completed, I think i might go nuts, but that's okay cause I already am a little nuts. ( I wish I could review while logged in but my damn phone won't let me so sorry bout that)
All I want is to know is if ed finally gets back together with his friends and family and how that all goes down, plus all that stuff with the underground rebellion and the homunculi doing whatever they do. I hate when good stories aren't complete, but seeing as how I'm one of the biggest procrastinators out there, I guess I could understand if you never got back to it

I am really reeeeally hoping you get back to this and continue. I will beg and plead if I must, if I thought it would do any good... I need more parental!Hughes/Ed (LOVE that Hughes is alive) and I need closure! I want Ed to kill Sherman and Margot sooooooo badly! *cough breath* Okay. I've been up 'till 6 in the morning the past 4 nights because in spite of how much pain this story causes I love it so much, I can't stop reading, it is so good. It is so good it made me a stalker, tracking down the LJ version.(Of course it helps that you posted the link in your profile. Heh.) Please don't be dead! Come back!

What happens next? Can you update soon please? I'm really curious!

I've spent all night and day reading this messed up, and absolutely amazing story. You've really spent a lot of time writing this, and I hope you can update soon.

I really like how this story is progressing. I read all of it on your live journal. Hope to see more soon!

hm..normally I'm not into these kind of dark and morbid stories, but I like how this one is turning out so far! No words in the chapter are wasted and I haven't skipped over any of the plot so far. The character development is well done too, especially Ed's. Just out of curiosity tho: you plan to update at some point? I know it's been a while but would be nice since I'm hooked XD

...nooo! That's it? Nooo, need more naaaooo!
Yay, whining. Makes me feel good.
...WHY do I like this story so much?! Ed gets raped, Pinako dies, Schiescka is tortured, Hohenheim is a bad guy, Rose is a homunculus... I could go on.
Oh, yeah. It's the foursome. And the snake. The snake is awesomely portrayed.
But mostly the foursome.

*sighs* I guess all is "well" as long as Ed doesn't get caught by those sick and depraved people. He's acting too stupid for his own good. Can't blame him though *sniff*. I need closure, we all need closure here...

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Bahhhh more questions to be answered I ttruly hope for Ed to see Winry and Al I'm on the edge of my seat waiting! Update soon!

This story is so good! Please update soon!

I always get mad at myself for reading your long stories because they are so good and from your AN make me hope you will update soon but since you do so much that it will be a while and I have no patience and I'm heartbroken by this story as well and I want to know what happens and won't for a while boooooo I just want them to have a happy ending and I just don't think I can wait...obviously I will but I will fight it

You are a brilliant writer and I love this story. I can't wait to see how the reunion is and how Roy reacts to what Sherman did. I hope you update soon!

I just want to make sure, this isn't the last chapter is it? I hope you update the story, I really want to see Ed and Al and Winry together again.