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Bit of a Minato wank but the flashes of humour and plot are engaging enough for it to not put me off too much

4th kazekage is named rasa . look it up on the dang wiki.

I thought minato's wife was kushina .-sarcasm-

JEBUS FUCK ALMIGHTY

i hate that i love this fic. i want to stop reading it cause i want to be bored, but its so good

Why is Naruto's mother suddenly named Sakura?

"He read every single Twilight book in one sitting without pausing and he didn't even flinch through the entire series. Not even once! Such a man is beyond my league when it comes to torture and pain." -pure gold.

Great story.

Naruto's reaction to meeting the shinigami aka his dad... please just please do we readers really need to explain why we need to see this?

Awesome story definitely worth a fav!

well I have read 16 chapters in a single sitting and can surely say you were very high and out of your mind when you wrote these scenarios anyway it's a fun humorous story so thanks for the read (now excuse me while I bleach my brain of a necrophiliac itachi and Kabuto x orochimaru)

bravo bravo. this was great and to be honest i loved it. I won't claim that this is the perfect ending but if you had half a brain you'd have know about it since the early cchaptes. thanks for the great work you made.

Good job

too lazy to log in. also, happy birthday. (if you're even still reading these reviews, which who knows.)

I like how the shinigami completely no-sells minato's death. that's the shinigami we all know and love.

"the achromatic room" I see what you did there

yeahhh comedy option

I like the final judgment. it's a good counterpoint to madara's comments last chapter about minato being a remorseless torturer. this time, minato departs from that path and, instead, uses the judgment as a vehicle to do good for the children of the future. it's cute.

I have mixed feelings about minato coming back as the new shinigami - like I said last chapter, it's kinda too deus-ex-machina-y for my taste. but whatever. 49 chapters, he/you have earned the happy ending.

Wait wait wait...Did you make someone named Sakura his wife? Or is that the assistant...? Rather confusing. Why wouldn't you keep Kushina as Naruto's mom? Your story, but rather...random.