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Well, I love this story, but as it hasn't been updated in 10 years, I have no hope.

Excuse me that was kinda offensive to me just because we're Irish doesn't mean we all look like bloody leprechauns
The most common Irish genes are actually fair hair and blue eyes which I have
And F.Y.I Lots of English have red hair too and anyone cane have green eyes
If I offended you in any way I am sorry but I am just trying to make a point

If it was anyone else I wouldn't worry unless it was
Her ions however Lily's a bewitching beautiful redhead
On a ship with lots of sailors whom haven't seen any
True beauty in years yet when James comes along so
Will her protection as well he's a knight in shining
Armour .what an indescribable reality check to receive
Out of the big blue sea away from miserable bunch
Of useless you please bring James into it
Sooner than later he's worth waiting for but some
Men might need to be talked to,the other two will
Arrive all in good time plus not having Sirius there
They mightn't be at each other's throats as much.
It's really a truly outstanding magnificently written
Educational suspense filled dramatic story that keeps
On giving readers happinessElizabeth skinner

Well it's absolutely stunning yet vastly compelling to
Keep on reading this intrepid adventurous excitingly
Brilliant story I can hardly wait until she meets James
Who's family are more powerful and wealthier than
Snapes ever were ,what a shame her supposed
Mother couldn't be bothered to wait for James to come
Along although fiery lily will teach him a couple of
Hundred things on the voyage of a ho ho
And a bottle of rum I'll get my way I'm an Englishman
Whom falls for a feisty blazing redhead good luck.
This is an exceptionally marvellous action packed
Romantically inclined swash

Well she did forget that her hair will grow longer
Overnight such an exquisite Colorado cannot ever be
Hidden and James can always tell the difference
Between a man and a young scared girl after a
While at least being the captain comes with lots
Of doesn't really matter when Sirius
And Remus enter the story as long as the filthy rat
Doesn't because this is a very enjoyable captivating
Story that has snape in plus cowards hate the seas
Death comes quickly not that bothered with
The updates either when they do come is fine this inspirational exciting wondrously awesome fun filled
Story has me delighted to keep on reading it forever.
All my love Elizabeth skinner

This is wonderfully imaginative and I'm hoping that you
Do continue with it it's truly unique as her mother and
Sister would be insanely jealous of lily she was very
Beautiful indeed though violet and petunia were
Rather nondescript live with James can
Discover her true beauty quite easily in her fighting
Spirit sense of justice her eyes honestly her mother is
Going to rue the day that she treated lily like she
Did James would kill for her no one hurts her ever
A totally fascinating brilliant hair raising lovely
Story which gives a different yet interesting view
Of their love story I'm skinner

Can you do more? #cliffhanger
Btw LOVE THE STORY!

PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS post again!WWWWUUUUUUAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!

Please update. I just started reading this and it is sooo good. I love the way you portrayed Lily's character. I know you haven't updated in years but please please please update. I love this story.

I just love Lily at the end! But plees dont say that she falls in love .with him! I want her and James to be together!

PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS SEND IT! IT June FOR KAMI'S SAKE! ITS KILLING ME!

Hi! I relize you haven't updated in several years (I read your profile, this isn't me being criticizing), so you might not end up reading this, but this fic was super impressive, and thank you for making Lily a much more realistic character then in other fics. You did a great job, it's a shame you don't write on this site anymore. You are missed! :( bye.

I love this story! I wish you would update :(

Dude come on you mentioned that you will post chapter no.19 by Jan 10 todays 13th Feb! I'm freaking out here!Post quickly!