Wah, you should continue you this with one more chapter... well... one that wraps up the events post Celes/Nihon... Hmmm... Because I love the contrast between the Elegance of Ashura/Fai and the devotion of KuroFai

Its really good -claps- please do another tsubasa rc fic! I loved this one!

Ah, lovely: each section is short but flows well with the others - you've written a condensed, plausible background for Fai. Good job.

I agree, Ashura doesn't seem like a "bad guy" per se (rather misguided, though.) The splash pages of him in TRC show him with a very sad, wistful look; I could see him asking "do you love me?" but not being able to truly love himself.

Gorgeous imagery - that adds a lot to the dark, melancholy atmosphere of this story.

Q: Ashura as a "wall" - is he some sort of magic negator/blocker?

It was good! Interesting Fye POV. I loved the scene with Kuro at the end. :)

Cheers!

Eiyori

... Wow. I loved it. I didn't get half of it, but God I loved it. It's beautiful, your writing style is light and "suffocating", as you say, all the feelings transpire out of your words. It's really beautiful. I hope you'll write more *_*

It seemed strange, though, for Ashura to ask Fay "do you love me ?". To me, at least. I would see FAY asking ASHURA the same thing. But it's interesting.

And OMG, I love how you write. I really really really do. *is in love* *adds to fave stories*

wow..

that was beautiful..

wonderful perception on the relationship between Ashura and Fai, not to mention Fai's past. My god, this was very VERY well written; i can see that you are extremely talented..

wonderful interatction between characters, and wonderful interpretations of the situation...

wow..

all i can say is that i'm looking forward to seeing more from you )

this was very interesting. i liked the way you set it up and the quick little hits and misses on what happened to fai before he sent himself to the witch. keep it up, you're doing a great job!