Mainly to other reviewers, A Reformed Shego is not bad.

Redemption isn't easy, or instant, it takes time and work.
Three chapters and everything is slowly changing.

That is good.

Kim pregnant with Shego's child.
Shego pregnant with Kim's child.
Both ideas have been done.

But BOTH pregnant at the same time with each others DNA...
Also done, but not very well.
The writer made one a son, not a daughter.

Suspension of disbelief they did Slaughter!

Please someone who CAN write, do it right.

Thanks

welp here comes the idiotic OCs, story's ruined.

I'm just going to say I love this but right now I just don't have the heart to read on. maybe later when I finally stop laughing so much...nice one

The tweebs need a scolding...
a good spanking as well...
nah... not enough!
beaten with a clue stick?
would that lesson take?
perhaps if bones were break?
thick headed they are!
impaling leaves a nice scar.

A permanent reminder,
that to others...
they should be kinder!

Someone wrote a nice short one shot.
Gemini is gone somehow.
The tweebs try to fill his slot.
Geniuses they may be.
Common sense they have not.
Kim caught them fast!
Then she had a blast!
Every single bone broken,
As a measure of her revenge,
It was only a token!

love it

jeff dunam

while it may be ok to use his ideas some of this is word for word

The story is very good.
The very end is not.
Personality transferring
Clones
Giving villains second, third, fourth, fifth, INFINITE lives is just WRONG!

I caught a few Doctor Who references. I also caught the fucking Farscape: Peacekeeper Wars reference, qouting Aron Sun, very nice. Now I want to watch Farscape, thanks a lot.

Belated congratulations on your graduation!
Original characters are fine.
Fanfiction is all about changing things.

I have read the other story.
With the dart scratching Kim and hitting Shego my guess was they were both mom's.
Shego alone works as well, maybe not as much fun.

The Way you used exterminate made the bebes sound like fucking dolicks

Oh dear lord Sheila Go Downe Hahahahaha that's some major foreshadowing right there

Shame Shin wasn't born in the hospital because then we would've had Cox downstairs delivering this great line.

"Listen up, there, Molly Menopause, I need you to quiet the hell down, you’re scaring everyone in the hospital. I mean, my God – they’re delivering a baby upstairs, and the poor kid’s using the umbilical cord to crawl the hell back in."