UPDATE

Gotta say, I'm sad that you never finished this. I love the interaction between Tory and the twins, I really liked Craw as well. I hope someday you'll pick this back up again, but i won't get my hopes up. To bad, because this was a fantastic story.

Frickin sweet! I loved it! Please update soon

ohhhhh I love this story! I was hooked from chapter 1! I hope you contiue with it!

~doulikecheeze, fanfic reviewer

What? No more?

Come on!

Great chapter! I love this story.

Craw is great. So cute.

Hm, I wonder when Lisa will get involved again, she is FBI now. Vivian looks liek her, but it's not right?

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

I loved your story...every time I sat down at the computer I had to read more until I finished...only to find out that's not the end! Argh! You must finish! This was just an extremely well written story and I love the cross over with Red Eye...very cleverly done! And I don't know why but I love Craw, that's just a really cool trick to write from the crow's point of view.

Awesome job!

this story is so effing amazing.

but you seriously need to update.

You write really well and I love how you captured the characters perfectly.

This is a good story. I'll keep an eye out for updates. One small note, though, about Jonathan's parents wanting him to be a doctor or businessman rather than a psychiatrist: a psychiatrist is basically a doctor that has specialized in preventing/treating mental disorders. So that would mean Jonathan did become a doctor, really. It might be better to say that his parents just wanted him to be a businessman or a businessman and something completely other than a psychiatrist, like a lawyer or something.

This is so disturbingly hot. I'm used to reading Bruce pairings, but wow, this fic totally blew me away. Love it. Really hope you update soon!

Okay, so I just read this entire story in two sittings (it would have been one, but at about 3am I realized that sleep was kind of important). Anyway, I'm totally hooked. I love Tory, she's an OC that I actually care about, which doesn't happen very often, and your portrayals of Jon and Jack are great. I've been alternately laughing, shuddering, and getting misty-eyed through these 31 chapters, and I can't wait for the next installment! Please update soon, or I will have to glare at you with my best imitation of Monster Eyes.

;-)

This chapter made me want to go 'muahaha' for some reason...

Okay... I think it's way overdue that I leave some sort of review for you; especially as I've enjoyed it so much so far!

It's very hard to write a believable O/C; but I think you've pulled it off very well here. Pure escapism... please keep it coming.

Just a little side point from a Brit... snog isn't quite as far as making out... just kissing, full frontal, tongue down the throat maybe, but not much heavier than that. Or at least it was when I went to school, back in the realms of fantasy. My favourite word has to be "formidable", which sounds much better when it's pronounced the American way... oh, I also like the word "chocolate" pronounced the french way, well any way really! I digress and waffle (another favourite word!). Update when you can...

That was insanely and darkly HOT!

You have penetrated the intimate corners of the psychotic mind with brilliance.