this is really cute!

I found this to be absolutely amazing. Perhaps it's because I tend to identify myself with Chie, but I found that (espically the beginning and end) the thought process she goes through is believable and very incharacter. Though the reader can predict the ending, the ever-so-present "we love each other but can't tell each other/ don't recognize it" is written in a new style that makes the repeated plot use alot more enjoyable to read. Your style is upbeat while still writing about a laid back character. Wonderful job pulling off a very enjoyable, amusing Chie/Aoi fic.

Great story. I thought that is was very cute. I don't think there is nearly enough fics with this pairing on the web. Keep up the good work.

~Leigh~

Interesting story. The memorable moment was learning that lesbians are the only females that sweat.

I was really looking for a story on these two.

Great introspection, just how Chie would act.

Squee. I loved that. Love. It was a bit predictable, but the rambling about the grass, and the different trains of thought, and just the way you wrote it... Yeah. It was good. I'm too tired to be reviewing...

~Naolin

Ah, I know where this is going. Wonder how it'll play out. At first the panting bit confused me, but then I got it. This is interesting...

~Naolin

What's this, a story focusing on Chie? ...Win. And for someone who barely got developement, you're writing her very well.

~Naolin

Nice story.. I suddenly feel poetic though, side effect I suppose. Chie is so sweet, ah..

Well, chow, Bailey n' Breake me

Wow. I keep my reviews as few as possible, but when I find as much remarkable writing ability as found here, I have no choice. An incredible piece. Naturally, I could comment on my few, insignificant, disagreements with this work, but that would be like pointing out a few emeralds in a sea of diamonds.

I'll end this with the words I use all too rarely. Please, don't stop writing. People of such quality are scarce enough as is.

Great fic! I so love Chie/Aoi pairings... _

Wow, it's really deep and emotional...I always cheer for Chie and Aoi. Just feeling how hard it is to find a really good fanfic for this couple. I really love this. Whoa... think I'm gonna sleep peacefully this night...hehe

Jeez... that was the sweetest story I've ever read... *Sigh* it's just the kind that leaves you with a funny feeling somewhere deep in your abdomen area

Kudos for the great story

I so love this! Seriously, I've never seen a Chie/Aoi fic before this one and rarely have I seen a Mai HiME fic done so poignantly. It was so sweet! I definitely want to recommend this and would be honoured if you would allow me to add it to our C2.

Cheers!

K

That was an excellent story. Chie's character was done very well as was Aoi's. By the way, the last few words on the story that Chie carves into the tree, those are the lyrics to the song Waltz by Suneohair? Anyways was a truly enjoyable read with a smooth ending.