I still love this story! Even while RE-reading it! (I can't actually remember how many times I've read it now XD )

The whole idea is just hilarious and you executed it so well! And your decriptions, especially through Miss Kincaid are so damn good!

Beautiful.

That's all I can say...
I was expecting a weird farfetched tale about them being hooked together for a long time and them never getting it off and yada yada... BUT I was DEFIANTLY pleasantly suprised! The story was realistic and the way you described the characters feeling was amazing! I can honestly say your my favorite writer on this site. I've read your oneshots too and I loved them as well! I think you may have just inspired someone enough to allow them to decide to publish some of their own work...

Thanks for the adorable story and continue the awsome work!

Your story is really awesome and importantly, realistic, if i were told that this was a episode of beyblade and it was written here, I would believe it..Seriously its reallly nice..it reallly makes me feel as if I really watching the whole thing...pls write more awesome tyhil one-shots

this was an awesome chapte

What a wonderful finishing line. XD Poor Miss Kincaid!

man ur characterization of tyson and hilary really was something i enjoyed .Though i feel there were some parts that dragged the story a bit ...anyways i would call it an awesum fic with a lot of humour , a factor evident in a tyhil relationship

Yo Red! So I know this is one of your oldest pieces of work on the site but I figure I'd review it anyway since I read through and enjoyed it. I don't see myself giving too much constructive criticism here as it's REALLY old. XD But I'll do what I can here!

So first of all your characterisation, as always was really good here! I see the foundation you worked on. ;p Only bit with this I found though was I'd have liked to have put a name to the gang of kids that roughed up The Chief. Oh man The Chief. Felt so sorry for him in this. ( Just seemed like a bully victim! Shame on you! ( I LOVED what you did with Ms. Kincaid; she always seemed so high strung in the cartoon and, to be fair, should have been in another profession IMO. Always felt so bad for her. XD I did like that Tyson and Hilary developed towards the end and I especially liked that you stuck in some history with the two, them hangin' around in preschool etc I mean. Was a great touch I found, I really liked it!

Your punctuation and grammar etc COULD have used some work but even as far back as this, it was just small stuff that you've blotted out in your more recent stuff which is awesome. No problems here then! Next!

The flow of the story was a bit detached I found but over the halfway mark I did also find they found their flow so as to speak; Ms Kincaid's parts - Tyson & Hilary's/Kenny's & The Kids. Oh, incidentally the leader of that group made me want to back hand him SO bad. XD

Overall it was a great read and I relished the Ty/Hil bits that you always manage to deliver so deliciously! Gonna look forward to the next one! 'Til then!

-Kenrai

Cuteness argument made me facepalm with both hands.

Please tell me who took the keys I don,t understand it please i am begginf

nice story funniest of all tyhil story so far

who took the keys.

That's gotta be one of the most funniest and cutest fics I have ever read!

Great job :)

This is seriously one of the funniest things I've ever read XD

Just discovered this story today and I have to say I love it! TysonxHilary is the best pairing and I'm happy someone has written it. I'm probably not making a lot of sense right now...but I really do enjoy this.

Like the handcuff idea :)

And both Tyson and Hilary are kept completely in character _

Faves!

~AquilaTempestas~

Ms Kincaid's finally lost it. Good story.

just luv it! best tyhil i've read!