cinder

Make more plz

Amazing chapter make more plz

cinder.

please continue

This is so gay

Tsunade

the Ino vision is getting ridiculous.

Ten ten x naruto naruto team shikamaru, kiba

Look you need to work on grammar. It is spelled ELVEN. Eleven is the number 11. Good story though the pacing and flow is somewhat off in places.

I love the chapter. I think you should use Kibo in Chino is Naruto‘s teammates. The reason is I don’t like Sasuke or Sakura. They deserve each other as far as I’m concerned because they’re both idiots in their booth week. Also when you do get to the CHUin Ain exams, Naruto will not be harassed or attacked by the snake Creek.

This chapter was good but I wish you had made Aiden make. In addition I think that Jeriah should be the one who found him from your first pole. I also think that he needs a different romance interest other than Eno Sequerra and tamari. Most of the fanfic that I read has one of those threechoices other than Hinata. Ten Ten has been done before however the stories or either abandoned or they had a bad plot line. TennTen Would really complement norito personality wise.

I just discovered this fanfic today and I love it. I can’t wait to read the next episode. I will always love dragons and I think Naruto having wine is a perfect friend for him because of their loyalty. I also believe that dragon should be named Cinder.

It is all right your not the only one who has it it will go away with time then the muse's will inspire you again

Awesome please write more