Im crying from this chapter

I like the story so far. I haven't finished the manga or anime yet, so I don't know if everyone is in character, but the pacing and storyline are great.

One thing I found a bit odd was that there was no obvious transition from modern to ancient Egypt. Only when Yugi was sent to fetch Seth, did I realise the cast had already traveled back in time.

When I am writing a story, I use linebreaks to signify a change in location or perspective. This makes it easier to read.

Mokuba calls his brother 'Nii-sama' not 'Nii-san'. I believe 'sama' conveys greater respect.

Just finished a reread. I love the characterization in this fic. The Hikari are innocent little devils, the Yaoi are Badass, Kaiba is awesome, poor Seth gets taken along for a ride and Ancient Egypt is in a near constant state of shock and disbelief. It's pure awesome is what this fic is. XD

I wish there were more fics like this. This was AWESOME

The enemies of Egypt don't stand a chance XD
Wonder what Seth's reaction will be to seeing his future reincarnation X3

I think Seth may actually pass out from Shock when Atem turns up XD, looking forward to seeing that

Interesting, though I'm really curious as to how Atem and Bakura got their own bodies

This story makes me so happy!

That was so very interesting and I thank you for writing it!

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Loved It!

This was AMAZING!

Wow it simply AMAZING!

Very nice, I loved it.

Just reread this, loved it again! The way you meshed the past and present together was wonderful and the plot was very entertaining. Very nice!

great story. :)