Wow, that was a really interesting take on a how the story could have continued! I really enjoyed your story. Thank you and I'll be sure to check in for a sequel sometime - if you don't mind my saying, the dragon king sounds like an interesting topic to explore more.

BTW, I loved the twist on how they were able to stay together. It was very original and interesting. I'm glad they can stay together now, though I hope they can restore the Kohaku River somehow. :)

This was lovely. It would be wonderful if you were to create a sequel to this:)

I loved this story. I would adore reading a sequel! I entirely understand the need to edit old fanfics- the first ones are always so much better sounding in our heads! sincerely looking forward to more of your work if you choose to bless us with it soon

I just finished reading the last chapter it was such a nice story and with a nice original plot i would love if you make a sequel!

best lucks and wishes for you!:)

Loved it please continue! :)

do try to write another squeal this is an excellent story and is great to be continued from do try if you get the chance

very good! i just watched the movie a couple days ago and completly fell in love with it. i luv ur story and hope that you could eventually make a sequel to it. keep up d good work :D

I am ridiculous. I must be crazy.

I seriously just read this from BEGINNING to END.

This story was sooo addicting! And I'm not one who goes for long stories like these.

Thank you so much for a wonderful read. The ending was so cute and satisfying :)

I think another thing that made me happy reading this is that everyone was so in-character. Well done on that!

Beeeeautiful job on this! I enjoyed reading every moment of it! :)

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Very nicely done. I felt that this could have definitely been the plot for a second movie, had there ever been one. I think I understood what Haku did...Please don't mind me while I say that the situation reminds me of D. and Yu-Gi-Oh. D

I do hope that there will be a sequel to this. I do know, however, that there is a life outside of fanfiction, and I understand if you are busy. I do wish to say that this is probably one of the best Spirited Away post-movie stories I've read so far.

Splendid Job!

Yes!

Thank you Bou! Now you know how evil your mama truly is...

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I can't believe the...(censor)

Is she so vengeful that she would be willing to hurt her own son in the process?

This is good...definitely almost like it could be a sequel to the movie. )

It's been several years, but I hope you end up writing that sequel. :)

Reading your ending author notes, I agree, this story is wide open for a sequel. And since you were so kind to leave it this way, you obviously must have realised how pestered you are going to be over having one.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story - it was not the typical kidnapping plot and I though the whole thing was very well thought out. I liked the idea of Haku carrying Chihiro as water - thats a good one, never heard of that before, so thumbs up for a truly unique idea!

Please write a sequel (if you haven't already - I'm going to check!) and thank you so much for writing what you have written.

thanks again,

Ritakna

This was an awesome fic. Very well done.

Hey, just finished here, and I have absolutely no complaints whatsoever. I loved everything about it. I liked your OCs. Usually I don't really like OCs but I loved the way you wrote them. Love the characters from the movie. I love Chihiro and Haku.

Was that a Tengu or something? :p Anyway, that was awesome. Hope you write more Spirited Away fics cause you're a good writer.

Pce!