Kim saying to ron is there something you want say and give to me

Great 1 shot

Now that what I'm talking about great one shot, Ron deserves it

this is so sweet

nice one never saw it coming

i found it while checking your profile not much into yuri but liked this one.

Never did finish primal primate, i liked that one

you where right about the story being divided into others, extremly confuesing and you do have a point about the anbu but a agian it was the older generation the council that did it, while you do have strong points about naruto and the demon but still you forgot that garra killed it's people and they love him even a old women dying for him. Naruto did far more and human also have the tendencey to idiolise power in heros even and sometime even more in villians and naruto is both thegreat hero that protects them from the gerat villian also keeping them safe through many battles, if anything the older genaration would peeing in there pants btu the younger ones never having that lose and haveing seen him saving them would find him a legend of the coolest kind.

Haven't you found the vilians more interesting at times, like great sodiers genghis khan, great ruler and living demon to his enemies. Geranomo warrior of such skill that no bullet could stop him, white men feared his name. His enemies sought his blood and yet when his battles where no more his enemies cheered his name, children look at him in awe. Men appreciate power and when a village wants a leader the seek the most powerful and awe inspiring and a with the greatest of demons is all that and a bag of chips.

Your points are true but men forget to easily the pains of the past, the first genration may not forgive but the future generations won't care because only whats in front them and what has been done in there there eyes will matter. Like the old saying those who forget the past are doomed to repeat it and men forget to much to ofton.

i do belive he will be hokage he just needs time for the old to die and the new to begin and naruto may have a very long lifespan or forever young because of the fox, his charkra creates flesh if i remeber corectly. i like your story and views

great story, i enjoyed it.

My favourite Valentine fanfic! Very ic, very well written, and a great idea! This is one of the few fanfics I reread every few weeks, because I just like it so much!

I hope this ain't a oneshot...but a preview of things to come. I've been waitin and hoping that someone would do a decent fic with either Monique, Zita, or even Yori as Ron's romantic match. Yori's are every now and then. But Ron/Monique and Ron/Zita fics are virtually non-existant.

Anyway...good work. Gotta Blast!

Now this was a good one-shot. Love the whole Kim/Ron back story on V-day and then seeing Kim react when someone else gives Ron a gift. Monique talk with Kim was prefect and I was sitting there chuckling when Kim ran through the suspect list. Monique basically told her right there. Great work and looking forward to more.

Hee hee! I often wondered about the Ron/Moni thing.

Good story!

THANKS!

Cool time a Ron/Monique fic was posted.

Looking forward to your future KP fics.

AW..

hehehe

I liked this fic.

heh you dont see too many of ron Monique and kim and Monique liking ron at the same time and staying friends even rarer.

Now that was a great Valentine's day story. Good job and very well done.

Bubba

Glad you stated upfront you knew the "The Tell Tale" heart, saved me an email :). very nice story. And the take on Kim was very good. Monique as the SV? I like it, she always seemed to have a thing for Ron but more control than Kim.

Thanks