good story

i loved it and the song me agianst the world by simple plan is my fav simple plan song possibly one of my fav songs. so when i saw it i had to read it. and when i read it it was worth my wild. it was a great story and i hope you write more. u know all of my reviews have a new pesonality. ok that was weird i just said that my reviews have personalities. so sorry this is one of my weirder ones. anyways i loved it. keep up the good work. ugh now i sound like a teacher. whatev i still loved it!

hey, just wondering why you wrote the story in this style? Is it becuase it's a fanfic for a T.V. show?

OH! I really liked it! It was really good! lol good job!

I like your story I think its sweet

i'm sorry, I can't read this. What is going on? Them leaving Stars Hollow? The people they love and trust? I'm sorry, Rory's leaving Lorelai, Lane, Sookie,Chilton? Luke? I mean, I can understand Jess leaving, but Rory just wouldn't do that. Not smart, 2nd season Rory anyway.

I think Jess is a little ooc. And I like the song lyrics you chose for Jess's little speech. Nice.