This chapter is humankind in a nutshell. The only flaw is that it is spaced too closely and it's easy to lose my place reading.

I don't remember how I came across this story, or more specifically this chapter, but I am glad I did. It helped me interpret some of the thoughts I have had and bring them into comprehension. Never in my life have I ever read something that made more sense than this. In my opinion, this should be published and distributed to every point of the globe.

My hat is off to you, dear sir/madam.

Been enjoying the stories since you've started writing them, and hope you continue on till Valia has said his peace (and then some). But one minor thing that I am going to critique on, is that the paragraphs, though seemingly grammeritically technically correct (or to me at least), was quite long and kinda hard to recover your spot if you lost it at times. Thats my only real nit-pick of this otherwise enjoyable story. Hope you continue on.

brilliance.

Well, that waas kinda throwing a loop at us. Great job!

Real Life comes first, my friend. If you suddenly didn't have time to write due to school, work, or other stuff more important, don't go beating yourself up on it. Least you did found the time to get a chapter out no matter how long it took. :)

So the final battle will begin between Valia and Kim & Yori. Quite a battle royale if one thinks about it, especially for the fate of the world at hand.

Yet why do I have a feeling that Ron is not out of the picture? What's happening to him could be the final phase for the MMP to take affect and make him the rightful Monkey Master. It would be him to come in a critical moment to make the difference in fighting Valia.

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter when it comes out and see how the fight comes out. :)

Oh, BTW, I like you have Kim and Ron has a couple but still have Yori loving Ron in the background. Ron knows he loves Kim but also knows Yori loves him too. Makes for a wonderful unofficial three-way relationship without making it really three-way anyway. Ah, amore. :)

Five thousand mile disadvantage is bad, very bad indeed. Uh, guys, we have a problem.

Looks like things are gonna get nasty, and real quick, even more so than it already has.

Eagerly awaiting more!

Finally caught up, and Ron is just as clueless as ever after all he's been through! Hehehe! Excellent job, simlpy spectacular!

YES! YES! YES! YES! Ron is BACK!

I LOVE you, man! I hope Shego and Ryan turn out alright...

Okay, just the littlest bit TOO cartoony there, especially considering how serious your series has been to date. I mean, stars over Yori's head? A labcoat and goggles suddenly appearing? Might have been a little over the top.

Still, it was funny as hell! lol

Eagerly awaiting more!

I love this chapter, especially the funny moments! LOL! Kim and Yori have to deal with a bizarre Ron as his mind trys to mend itself. Yet I love the ending, with Yori getting her Ron kiss by accident and Kim looking like she was going to kill him suddenly was very happy he's back. Cool chapter! :)

Multiple personalities eh? Well, that should make things interesting for a while. lol

Eagerly awaiting more!

Oh, we still read. I know at least I am following this very closely. I can't believe it's been 5 months either.

Val, Lexis and Shego have their own individual agendas. I'll admit I haven't the foggiest. Something's up with those three.

*snickers* I can't believe Shego actually for that trick.

And Kim checkmated by Rufus. We know he's intelligent, but this... She must be out of it.

Ah, Ron. Heh, if that happened to me I'd be at least wary. But to run? Man, he must have had a real hard knock :P

Wait... What did Yori mean by "again"?

Oh god... Ron acting like that... Like a drunk man on fire!

Haven't laughed so hard in ages.

Intense action and drama, and then you end with that. I have to say, the contrast between the serious and the comedic was quite refreshing, especially the almost Wiley Coyote-esque moment with Monty.

Eagerly awaiting more!