Reviews for Shattered
DD2 chapter 37 . 5/19/2008
I look forward to reading your fic!
77517 chapter 37 . 5/18/2008
Congrats on the birth of your babies!
Kikidevil17 chapter 36 . 6/2/2007
Two more amazing chapter! You are a great writter and I am really enjoying this story.

Please keep writting!
Kikidevil17 chapter 34 . 6/2/2007
Wow, Double or nothing! This has to be one of the most sexiest and romantic chapter i have ever read. Great job with this chapter. You did an excellent job describing the sex scene, it was not awkard at all.

Great Job!
Misbehavin chapter 36 . 6/2/2007
These two chapters were great. Love it when Mac and Kelly jump all over Dickie. Poor Rod having to walk a tight rope with an exhausted and emotional Mac. But of course, it all comes out well in the end-just as it should.
DD2 chapter 36 . 6/2/2007
Great chapters! Thanks! lol. I love this fic, and you are a great writer! Continue soon please!
Misbehavin chapter 34 . 5/30/2007
Double or nothing is right. Nothing like Theo in the mood for a little lovin'. But did Mac really call Rod a little girl ("You're one) or is that a typo?
My Other Side chapter 33 . 5/29/2007
Well, I'm quite a fan of the new update-rate, I must say.

As for the chapter, I think it was necessary. Getting back to the plot without completely ignoring Jim. You had to get past his death somehow, storywise, and this was the way to do it without forgetting all about him.

I am sitting in anticipation of the next update.

Love, Tina
Celticgirl84 chapter 33 . 5/28/2007
That chapter was great

It was very real to me, with me carrying twins like Mac, and having been put on bed rest. (thank god thats over for now).

I loved it.

And those questions are pretty much what the docotor askes me every 2 weeks, Great job

By the way I dont speak fluent Welsh in the slightest, I can say hello and goodbye thats about it.
77517 chapter 32 . 5/28/2007
I have to confess that I burst out laughing when Mac asked Kelly to be her chief of staff.

This was cute: "“Has she lost her mind?” Vince laughed."

“Hey!” Kelly said, offended. “I could do it if I wanted to…” - I like how Kelly has her usual spunk with Vince - it was lacking when she was talking to Mac.

This was excellent: “No… last week sometime…”

Are you saying Dickie's going to be the new press sec?
Lara Cox chapter 32 . 5/27/2007
wow... I definitely didn't see any of this coming. You are a box full of surprises! And I love it.

this story gets more and more exiting each chapter

please, continue

Lara
Kikidevil17 chapter 32 . 5/26/2007
OMG I want more. I love the fact that you made Kelly Chief Of Staff, very original. I loved all the Mac and Rod love.

Please update us soon!
crazilyfruity chapter 31 . 5/22/2007
omg theo! this is such a good story, i can't believe you haven't finished it yet! wow... i can't wait to read the rest of this story! omg. well...i will definitly check this every day just to see if you've updated! Well, school calls.. lol.. :)
My Other Side chapter 31 . 4/29/2007
Heya!

*huggles update*

I love it! You portrayed the emotions really well.

Where will you take it from here? The funeral? Or will we skip that?

I'm eager to hear from you. If your schedule allows it, of course.
Kikidevil17 chapter 31 . 4/28/2007
WOW! This was a very intense chapter! I almost cried, it was just so deep and sad! You did a great job with it, I especially loved the last night!

Great update! update us again soon!
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