so sad you never finished this story, its very good.

I absolutely love your story so far, and can't wait to see how it progresses. Perhaps the culprit is her ex-boyfriend Michael Mawker?

This is a great story. I can't wait to see where they end up finding her.

Hello - I really love this story. If your still out there, please come back and finish it. It is really good. :)

This reminds me a lot of a csi episode actuly to much other than that its great lol

I am begging you for more of this story? :)

ohh i luv ur story so far its great! update asap plz

Ohh...this is very interesting, you've written this very well, i am really exited to see what happens next, update soon cos i hate not knowing.

Hero

OH my Gosh Don't leave me hanging do they find her in time? what happens next? I love this story and I really hope you update soon.

I am hooked! Please update soon you have really captured who the characters are.

Very interesting thus far. I'm looking forward to an update.

How did I know it was going to be abby kidnapped? I love this. Well, as much as you can love something that puts your fave character in danger. One thing that I do love is Gibbs reaction to all of it. I'm putting this on alert so I can read the ending.

Luv ya

StwbrryCSI

this is pretty good.

Haha, I love it! Awesome mention of Tony being over at Kate's after the whole Ari trauma... Nice little personal touch there. Ah, and poor wee Abby, normally she would enjoy being in a coffin, but this is different! Keep going...

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