This is fucking awesome!

Nyc chapta

Dude like fucking update this story is like so awesome you have to update soon and when are sasuke and gaara going to finally do it and is itachi and the dragon chick going to get together or is he going to be with neji you like have to update

Awww come on can u please continue with this if u can :-)

I really liked this chapter and this story. I just started it a couple hours ago and I couldn't put it down lol. I really hope you keep writing it.

MOARRR

I don't really get the fame with this story, but I guess it's cause of you demanding reviews. I thought it was nice until I met Itachi. He's extremely out of character and so is Neji. Lack of dialogue spacing makes it hard to read, and you need to work on your grammar.

I think it's pretty shitty to ask for reviews. You write because you want to, not to get reviews. Yes, it's nice to get feedback on how your writing is, but apparently you just want an audience. You want reviews to go up in the number count, so you threaten not to update.

Coming off as a complete bitch about it totally ruined the mood for the first chapter. I already sensed it going downhill from the moment you asked for ten reviews in the first chapter.

Your writing is inconsistent. Some points were very weak. Others were overflowing with generous vocabulary. Keep it consistent or it ruins the writing. I guess not many people review to give anything but, "OMG!1111 review plz! SO gewd! luv it! YAY!1! SO ORIGINAL AND NICE."

I will not be reading anymore chapters, seeing as most reviews looked like this and the chapters were shit. It's been several years. I certainly hope you've matured up a bit an improved your writing. Tootles!

OK I'm a little lost...So Gaara and Sasuke go to the same school; Gaara's the lone wolf and Sasuke's the popular boy who wants alone time...but what village are they in? I'm guessing the Leaf Village...Anyway, I think this will be a very interesting story

man u got to post more. very very good.

omg, wheres the rest?

hey this story's really good, can't wait to read more!

"and to release the caffine he had ingested the night before"

I love how you say that.

You could have say "gone to go piss", "went to pee", "relieve himself." And so on.

Don't mind me!

I'll continue to read your story!

"random posters on his ceiling of different bands such as Greenday, Rob Zombie, Linkin Park, System of a Down and many others" -Sasuke's room

-comment- That's hot.

Me: ...Sasuke is hot...so is Gaara...and Neji...

...Anyway,

I like your story so far and hope this entertains you!

Man, pls pls pls continue it! I've loved it so far and felt disapointed at it abruptly haulting! pls pls pls! Continue it PLEASE! (be amazed, I'm actually saying please...)

Wows, I want to know what happens! please continue... i will be waiting ]