Awesome!

interesting story thanks for sharing

I really enjoyed this story :) Thank you for writing it!

Really enjoyed reading this story. I like how real you made everyone seem.
Thank you for many great reading hours.

Nicely written. Kudos.

That was so cool! This story totally captured my attention from beginning to end. Young Daniel is a big favorite of mine. Great job!

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Excellent story. I think this is my second time reading and I still really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing the story.

quite honestly i was annoyed at the rebukes that jack got from his grandparents. when someone almost beats you to death you don't get to be rebuked for being slightly snippy to them. i'm not too sure about him forgiving his father, it was nice that he let go of his grudge, but i suppose im mean and i just don't want jack to talk to him anymore even so

the more i read this story the more i feel the need to go play with my little cousins! or maybe go kidnap a cute little kid for an hour:)

lol i can't help the fact that i like sam! it was pretty amusing how fast sam's mind jumped to marriage, but seeing as i recall sara being in about one episode of sg1 i'm not too attached to her, although i've got a feeling poor sam won't be getting what she wants

*sits silently in awe because of the great storyline*

I loved it!

O.o damn i need sleep but ill some chapters

all i can say is "Uuuhhhm?"

hey. Reading this story all over again :) are u going to wight another one. hopefully wight more about jack and daniel. thanks again for this great story :):):)