It has been more than 9 years since you have updated! Please update again! It is a great story! I love the idea of Harry becoming an animagus!

Good story! Keep updating!

That was much easier to read! Much improved! I liked it, good job!

Looks pretty good! I have a few suggestions: 1. press double enter to seperate the paragraphs or use the TAB button. For example:

blah blah blah blah blah" said Harry

"blah blah blah blah blah," agreed Ginny.

That makes it easier to read. Also, space after capatalize in the right places. Spelling is good, but I saw just a couple small things. Your story looks good, regardless, and I say that you shouldn't get discouraged, and keep writing and I'll keep reviewing! Good luck!

First of all, if your too lazy to write out all of Voldemort's name, don't even bother writing. I mean, really. It's only three extra letters. You also really need a beta. The spelling, grammar, and punctuation need serious help. "Sorie, Harry." Sorie? What does that mean, And lets not get into "traipsized" up to his dormitory. I believe that you mean traipsed. If you're 16 and still write like this, you need to get some help.

How can he become an animangus when it took the Marauders (or at least James, Sirius, and Peter) five years to become one? Hmm...this should be interesting...I have to admit, at the end of chapter one, I was ready to hit the back button and never read this fic again...I was mainly thinking "Somebody get this person a Beta!" no offense, but it was very hard to read and...well...to be honost I didn't like it very much. Then I decided to go onto the next chapter and it was much better. But you still need to slow down and describe what Harry's thinking and such. Great plot, though. Update fast!

OOPS!I just reread the 1st chapter and now I get it!Sorry 4 wasting your time with that 1st review.

I like your idea,although in that last part of ch.1,I was a little confused about what you saya that Voldemort was going to go back in time and kill Harry's parents when they were 15,but then you mention that Harry thinks about how he's always wanted his parents to be he making up a plan to save them then AND on Halloween,1987.(Yes,1987,NOT 1981...What is it with you people and 1981?The 1st book was published in 1997,so if you subtract 10 from that you get logic.)

It's bloody fantastic so far! I can't wait to read more... so hurry up with with it then!

WRITE MORE

u need to update now or else im gonna be mad

p.s. my s/n for fanfiction is the same as i signed my name so u can read my storie if u wanna

I really like his. write more please

Good story. :) I thought the second chapter was better than the first although it was shorter. :) I don't think it is nice to call Voldemort "Voldie", but it's a funny name. But you're the author, so... :) Can ya please R/R my fics too ?

That is Very GOOD and well get the next chapter out soon! K?

luv da story, keep up da good work, k? i wannna hear da story