Too sweet! I've always secretly liked the Harry/Luna ship, though you don't much of them (that are good). I loved how you portrayed the characters, and the sweet "tension" between Harry and Luna (I was kinda hoping for a kiss, but your ending worked just as well).

Beautiful it made me cry a little nice work

Great one-shot!

That's a VERY sweet story :)

I like your version better than the original. I guess because I'm HPLL-biased. :D

(1) You have good command of language. You write well. Consider being a writer?

(2) I must commend that you were able to keep Harry's and Luna's "original" characterization in your fic. They didn't sound a whole, new other persons suddenly. Most common pitfall.

(3) Your fic's details are very complementary. That's what makes your fic whole and clean.

(4) You were able to take off from Harry's angsts successfully. Everything then followed smoothly, including Luna's wisdom.

(5) I've so much enjoyed the philosophies in your fic. I've always believed Luna was very smart and wise, though in a mystical sort of way. All the best people are mad, after all (Alice to Mad Hatter). :)

Five out of five stars! Congratulations and keep it up! :)

Awwh, very nice :) Your writing style is great.

Aww, this is sweet and so very Luna.

WOW I love your writing style. It's just so good I can't explain. Well done :)

yay! very wonderful! love the pairing!

This is not the standard Harry/Luna story, the standard one is one where they have a funny/awkward/ or downright weird conversation, one that is filled with fluff and or cute little remarks. They all stick to the 'crazy' side of Luna while not paying much attention to her serious side. Your's is not the 'Standard Harry/Luna' story. This is GOOD!

It made a wonderful change to read something that has Harry and Luna portrayed so well and accurately. Don't get me wrong I love the funny/silly H/L stories but it's really hard to find a serious/semi-serious one that isn't smothered in angst.

Also the use of the dance was nice too, it's in alot of other stories but it actually works in yours. I loved how you drew attention to their similarities via the tit-for-tat conversation. ARGH! there's so much I could talk about here, but i'd be ranting... So I'll sum up now, your story was the BEST serious Harry/Luna story I've read.

I love this couple. It's so rare and sincere. Luna is just perfect for Harry. Like you said, She makes him laugh and see the world with another view.

The story it soo sweet and beautiful, and at the same time it was quite and slow like a dance and a good hug.

Congratulations.

That was so beautiful, I really liked it!

Ooh, very, very nice fanfic! Favorited.

Aw, that was so sweet! XD

Simple and Sweet. I love it!

and also faved.

Ah... It makes me smile :) I love your story!