“For Draco and a few select, others who recognized Lucius and re-told the story—the legend began with a mysterious masked man dancing with their Head Girl as if he were the other half of her soul. But it would still be much later for most—the legend most people knew started when Hermione reminded Lucius he should be calling her Mudblood. For Harry and those he would later recount the story to—this is where the legend began.” This paragraph from the previous chapter made no sense.

How does Lucius have his cane? He went straight from Azkaban to being tortured in the forest and then to the cabin. At what point would he have gotten his cane?

Why would she be having a dream about something that hasn’t happened to her yet?

Honestly hermione should just snitch on his ass since he wants to be an ungrateful bitch. This bitch stupid

This is such a wonderful story!

This was super sweet. Well done !

I truly loved this story. So gorgeous. A bit confusing at times, but still beautiful xoxo

Brillaint and very well written

Loved It! Favorite writer so far

HH/LM

I know I sound pathetic, reviewing old fiction that probably the author abandoned the acc. But couldn't help it.
It feel sinful reading a student barely passed her teenager age with her teachers.
Still it was too captivating and sinfully delicious to read it.

Awwwee! Its so sweet. But I never saw it coming- Lucius as the head of the order of pheonix. He really loved Hermione. And the characters are so in tune. Thank you for this!

That's so cute how they get their own story :o
Love it
xxx

Hahaha, Hermione is like Luna Lovegood
XDD Love it

I really love This story. it's so romantic. they are perfect together