great story but this is the correct way to spell Rodowsky

hurry up the plot is okay but wats the main event

and maybe usin spellcheck would help srri

I really like this story so far. The concept of Shea and Vanessa as a couple is a good one and I agree that Shea was underused in the series. I really enjoyed this line too:

“AH!” Shea screamed back, a much more manly, of course (at least, that’s what he claims).

However, I would have liked to see a slower buildup to their relationship. It happened so fast.

Some people are saying that they can't see Nicky getting in trouble like that but I can. Maybe he wouldn't have gotten into big trouble on his own but he was always desperate to belong with the triplets, who are likely to get in trouble. It's definitely possible to me that he'd join them when they're doing something wrong just to fit in.

It's a good story but a little cheesy in someparts. and I don't imagine nicky getting in trouble like that.

Just a Girl - If your fan fiction pieces are written in the same style as your review, then don't bother posting them. No one wants to read something like that. Use proper spelling and not 'text style' writing and people may take you more seriously.

FFBP - I enjoyed the start of your story and I think it's an interesting concept. I also like the coupling of Shea and Vanessa. I always thought he was an underrated character.

I like your idea, but there are a few typos. If you want me to beta read for you, I would be willing.

Anyway, sounds interesting!

Anything Is Better Than Reading Crap By Celica60. Good Job!

Hey its really good plz continue it though i cant c nicky getting in trouble with the law loln vanessa n shea make a really cute couple ihava question if u dont mind ive written afew fan ficsbut i havno idea how 2 publish them could u help me plz?