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That was really good. I agree about not talking about Ronon and Teyla coming off the enzyme - that was rather odd. But in terms of the story, it was well done, and since Ronon does get rather...playful...when on the enzyme I could even see him yanking Liz in the water :D

This was very nice...any chance you'll write a sequel?

Great story, full of contained emotions.

I'm not really a Liz/Ronon shipper, but I'm a real fan of this story!

Good work!

Thank you

Oh, I love this! Your description so vivid one is able to picture Ronon and Elizabeth at play in the ocean, enjoying the unexpected free time, enjoying the company of each other. Well done!

That was great! just the right amount of emotion

SEQUEL! I WANTS A SEQUEL!

I BEGS FOR ONE! ON MY HANDS AND KNEES! PLE -breathe- EASE?

That was wonderful, slightly chilling tone to the story, a melancholy perhaps despite all the playfulness and heat to it. It feels a very unique story, is just great that way.

That was really good.

I too was disappointed with how little time was spent on Teyla and Ronon getting off the enzyme. Nice little fic on Ronon, and Elizabeth. (Looks away innocently) Keep writing.

That's lovely! Ronon and Elizabeth definitely make an intriguing couple. And I can see the restrained wickedness hiding deep down in Elizabeth.