depressing, a disgusting story.

Very well written.

But I love your story ;/

Overall review: Your story was very good until it got inappropriate. My advice is, next time you write a fanfiction, try to keep it within the original series appropriate level, maybe a bit higher, but this was totally...ugh...I stopped reading after the...uh...scene.

Awesome story! Please update soon!

A hate stories like this. Would it kill people to give Aang some damn dignity? Katara's torn between Aang and Zuko, Aang needs to drop her behind. It's not fair to him. Aang deserves far better than her.

Hell, why can't Aang get with another girl? Then Katara would know how it feels

I love where this is going! Thanks for posting. 3

Nice chapter

you need to write more

Omg you have to keep writing this story! I read it a few months ago and when I came back to see if any new avatar fan fictions came out, I was happy to find that yours was updated with a few new chapters. So to get back into it i read it again! (Did I tell you the story is amazing yet?) I love the character development, the conflict, just about everything in this story so keep it up, your an amazing writer.

Wow, this is six years old, but wow. That was an amazing first chapter. Well done. *claps, at a loss for words*

Such a good job, u finally explained so many unanswered questions. Good job

I like this story a lot. But their are some things that I am still puzzled. Why can't Aang earth bend the island to destroy it? All in all I'm enjoying the story, to be honest I don't like any zutara moments in any story, but these moments in this story are quite nice to increase the story's depth, though Aang's reaction towards Zuko making moves towards Katara (and when he said that Katara and Zuko kissed when Aang was missing during those 6 years) are quite disappointing. I think you should have made Aang's reaction alittle angry because of the slight betrayal he might have felt. I hope you continue this story without rushing it up, and lets just hope Aang wouldn't die :). Keep it up.

Zuko and katara had another moment? not only kiss, but a hot session

I don't understand why they don't just get on Appa and leave Ozai there on the island? I'm enjoying the story but the question keeps nagging me.