Good one! Thanks for sharing your writing talent.

Hi! Well done on an excellent first S&H story :) You really did a great job on their voices, hope to hear more from you soon!

very good...great story...keep it up..

Very nice, especially for a first fic in this fandom. You've captured their characters well, and I could hear their voices. I liked the touch of banter at the end - very much in character for these two. They don't like "soapy scenes".

I hope you'll be writing more soon!

This was a good missing scene, bravo to you for thinking about Hutch and his former addiction, tying them together. I didn't think of that! Nicely done for your first time, hope to see more from you, something longer would be nice. I think you have a nack for writing.

Delia

Hi,

Nice missing scene and a good look into what each guy was thinking. I had been wondering what they were thinking at that point. Poor Hutch did look so sad and alone in that scene.

Loved the last few sentances LOL!

Sincerely,

Strut