Please... this story really deserves an ending...Please...kathleen

More please don't leave the boys in danger

Apparently I wasn't logged in just now when I posted that review (I'm the really long guest review that was just posted) but I neglected to add that you can always PM me to talk about fics, cuz I usually end up having ideas that could totally be helpful if you ask me plot questions. For now, though, I'm totally okay with an update.

This is a great fic. I love it, and I feel that you really understand the Winchesters. As far as I am concerned, it is 103% in character. And I love that whole silent communication thing that they have as brothers, and the unspoken rules thing. I have added it as part of my group of head cannons for SuperNatural. Your writing is really awesome, and I have only noticed an extremely small handful of spelling mistakes, which is great for a fic that's as long as yours is. I also like the plot and I think that it's awesome so far. Please update soon, and I must stress the whole extremely in character thing. Like, really, really in character. You have hit the accurate mark and then some. You have insights that 49 out of your average 50 fics don't have. Probably more, actually, because I've never read a SPN fic like it, with all the brotherly silent communicstion and all your insight. I'm really looking forward to your update.

Loved this story, really wish you would finish it.

Chapter 3: omg the beginning part was exactly what i was trying to explain to someone earlier in the week. Love your style of writing btw, especially the detail and accuracy of the bros thoughts & feelings.

I see that this hasn't been updated for a while. Like six years... But if you do decide to continue it, I will definitely read it!

I love the plot line that you have set up, and you seem to have several different ways that you can go here. I can't wait to see which one you choose.

My favorite parts? The bromance moments. You have some of the best ones I have ever read. They are perfectly in character, completely masculine, and astonishingly sweet at the same time. The silent communication, the way they read each other, the way they rush to protect each other is incredible. I really hope that you continue!

This is a joy to read.

"I can't be alone, Sam's calm retelling said. Don't take him from me. I wouldn't survive it.

And neither would you."

Plea, warning, and veiled threat all at once. Love it!

please update soon :)

So, is there any chance at all that there are plans to finish this because it's really good and I'd love to see how everything plays out and how Dean and Sam work out things with the visions and things. So, I'm gonna ask very nicely, Please, Please, Please, can we have an update. Happy Writing ;)

~Thalia013

great story. I really love it :-) poor sam, it must be terrible for him to have this visions and that people do not want to touch him, but thank's god dean is there for him and shows him how much he cares for him, loves him and how much sam means to him. great. I really would like to read more supernatural stories from you.

I'm excited! I can't wait to see what's next.

Creative, Incredibly well-written, and a perfect testimony of the boys relationship.

I love it. It's fantastic!

Thank you for sharing!

Judi

I super duper like this story. Its very interesting. I especially enjoyed the flashback to their childhood and them being seperated.

Good job. :)

But, there's more right? Right? Please?

The twat! Kick his ass, Dean!