Omg omg omg! What a hell of a caseload and roller coaster for Greg to discover. Please please please keep writing and update soon!

Whoa, this is fantastic! UPDATE MAN! ;)

this is really good, i really like your style. do do continue, you've got a good thing going here

Nice story, i like that you didn't ignore Nick's reaction to the case while focusing on greg and sara.

nice story so far

Will you update this story at some point? The writing is amazing, and I really want to find out what happens next.

Did you abandon this? To bad, it was really good. I was so happy to finally find a fic where Sara gave Grissom a piece of her mind.

HEY! YOU JUST CAN'T STOP AN AWESOME STORY LIKE THIS! I just stumbled across your story and ate it up like candy until I find it's not finished! *on knees* PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ~_!

Hey. Just caught up to your last chapter! It's really very good.

(Poor Greg.)

Anyways...I'm loving it so far! Keep up the good work!

Hi. Just dropping by to say that I am absolutely hooked on this fic. Can't wait for your next update, which is why i have added it to my alert list and wait with bated breath haha.

Shabbii

poor greg( great story,can't wait to read more

I am an extremely lazy person who almost never reviews. I used to review most everything I read, but those days are over. Anyhoo, I am now finally going to review your story. I love it. I've always loved it. I thought the first chapter was fantabulous. And then I stopped reading fanfiction for a while, and forgot about this little gem. I was recently browsing through Greg/Sara fics and found it, and I'm so glad I did. You're an excellent writer who tells a great story very well and portrays the characters true to who they actually are. I love the bit about the Sadie following Sara into the bathroom in this chapter because my cat Taffy does that all the time. I also love the ending scene of this chapter with Sara shooting down Grissom. I'm not sure when you posted this chapter, but everything that happened in this scene still applies to episodes today. I feel like Grissom has been childish with Sara and is only paying her attention now because she's finally moved past him. Even though she isn't actually with Greg on the show, she looks happier and no longer pines after a man who is incapable of maintaining a healthy long-term relationship. So, kudos to you for excellent writing and tremendous insight.

Wow, this is amazing so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the phenomenal work - POOR GREG! I love Greg, and I really hope he gets better soon. He's amazing, and so utterly hot.

ahh! i can't type without tears streaming down my face! that's just soo sad! i love Greg and that's just so sad! i really love this story and i can't wait for an update!

-x-liv

Please update...