"Castle on a Cloud" really fits well with raven's childhood. It's really easy to understand even if you never saw les miserable. good job, it was a nice one shot.

This story...actually made me cry...it was so beautiful! TT_TT You're a really good writer! I didn't think it was cliché at all, I liked your lyrics, as well!
There should be more stories about Raven's childhood-or ALL the Titan's childhoods for that matter, there's so much story potential that's rarely looked into...
You ROCK!

SO MUCH LOVE! I almost wish there were more fanfics about Raven's past now... AMAZING JOB!

That. Was. AMAZING! *sniff* you really captured the idea if what a young Raven would be like I think! It makes me want to write some fanfic about Raven's past myself! (Though it would never be this awesome) I will TOTALLY be looking up your other stories!

Please write more like this if you can!

This story actually made me cry! :,(
Poor little Raven! I want to give her a hug-even if it made something explode. I like your spin on the lyrics and the look into Raven's past was very interesting and believable! I LOVED IT!

Wow that was WOW im lost for words

i can relate to at school hates me and always stares at me and laugh about this year.I fell so sad and your story made me feel you know what I cant wait to graduate!D Thanks for the cool story!

oh. my. god. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! IT was so deep, I started crying. ENCORE!1

i liked it, its cute

you have a good start! hope you update soon!

*Grins like an idiot* Oh my God. That was PERFECT. Seriously. I've actually never read anything like this before. Not many people seem to bother going back to her childhood, even though it's such an interesting one to explore. But Raven here is PERFECT! *Squeals* She's exactly what she probably would have been like. I can't imagine what it would feel like to be in her situation, but you got it! Yeah...I'm rambling... but I loved this thing! OK...got nothing else to say but this is going straight into my FAVES...and I'm sorry I talk so much. *Snickers*

And the change of lyrics was very clever.

xSJ:)

it wasn't good at all...It was awesome! you should seriously think about making it a story...

~BBT~

Please excuseme whilst I drown myself in my own grief.

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Anyway, this was different, but in a good way. i like it, in that weird sadomasochistic way we all love a bit of angst and stuff.

*sigh. wipes eyes with tissues*

sniffle

Nice, I liked it. It was very emotional. Although you said Arella had a Chakra on her forehead? We all do. in fact we have seven, one is the third eye on our forehead. But I liked it.

Wow that was great! Made me cry a little..