Thank you for this piece of art and giving my OTP a HEA. We are not worthy

Loved the little section where Lukeios talked to Starbuck over the radio and also the names he has for people

Your writing has potential but I think it needs fleshing out. Your character interaction is very good - the dialogue is lively and appropriate. However your setting is almost entirely lacking - all the action seems to basically take place in a vacuum. The plot could use some work - you set up events and pieces and then let them dangle. For example, the Cylon pilot could have been used more effectively. Also, the woman who asked Kara about becoming a pilot - you brought it up and then did nothing with it. Overall, you need to clean this up, fix the grammar and tighten the whole thing and it would be really good.

I read this once before but it was nice to do a re-read. I liked that it dealt with everyday life for them, without the necessity for constant battles with the Cylons yet the tone still remained authentic. Lee and Kara's newlywed propensity to go at it in the moment was sweet and I loved her pregnancy at the end, especially when she called him an overachiever.

I really enjoy reading long detailed thought out story's. that you can defently tell has a start, a middle and an end.. Cudos to a story well written

Ok. I finaly finished this extremely long story. It took me nearly a week to read it. It was a little bit repetative in some places. but over all it was pretty ok. i really enjoyed the Lee Kara stuff. I waited until the end to review though. I have to say I found that I could tell where you were in the season when you were writing because you sort of followed the events. I'm not completely sure if I liked the ending though. It was a little bit anti climactic and I think Kara would have suffered from morning sickness by that point. So if Lee was any sort of husband, he would have noticed.

I think I should point out that also because of the job sharing, Lee is also a flight instructor, since he has half of her job.

That was great! To tried 2 read anymore. Time(Almost6:00am)

That was kool!

I liked it but it is very long.

This was a great story adn I loved the eending! Twins, I would love to see how they handle that one! Thank you so much for sharing your story with us, it was a great ride.

Bravo! Great story! I have enjoyed this and I shall miss it! Bravo once again.

Can't believe it's over, fantastic story, thanks for creating it!

Great fic! Just fantastic.

I have enjoyed reading every chapter. Thank you for bringing us along with you on their life together. Gods knows we probably wont ever see it on the show. Wonderful story.