This is very interesting. From the start, I pictured this story being about Yamcha, and expected Vegeta to be the cause of Bulma being taken away from him, but the then I remembered what it said just under the title..."the charaters can be...anyone."

Well...I didn't cry, actually it didn't faze me one iota. No offense or anything but I'm a B/V fan and I didn't read niether of those name and I couldn't imagine Vegeta acting like that, maybe...Yamcha, but lets not put Buma in that HORRIBLE predicument. (Having Bulma's last kiss be from Yamcha, yuck!)But anyway I don't know who it was so I don't know if I should be sad.

wow, that was really sad, but GREAT! ur a really good writer, i have read some of ur other stuff and u have a great website!

I'm 110% sure I read this before... I just can remember who the couple was (if it ever had a couple's names) I think it had something to do with Gohan but I can be wrong... I'm usually wrong so I won't guess. Great job! You truly are the princess of tragedy. Notice I say princess and not queen 'cause there's no queen. Only a princess! (Like Vegeta always says: " I'm the prince of all saiyans. " Why can he be the king? I mean the king died doesn't that make him the new king now? ) Don't mind my dumb ideas! Bye and Good Luck always (even if you don't need good luck with all your talent). BYE!

Angsty as hell...like you! (I did NOT mean that to be BAD! *sigh of relief*) You are my NEW queen of ANGST! *Cheering & applause* "I here on this day, May 17 declare that you Robmarie, my BEST friend are the QUEEN OF ANGST!" *Grin* I HOPE that you know this! *By now your EGO must have grown...I intended it to!* *Waves & Bows*

peace/love

~Kun

P.S.: "...Yes, master!..." (lol)

That was sooo good...I'm still crying...Gosh, I can hardly type cuz my hands are shaking...That's weird..Anyway, Keep writing!

Good thing PA2's not here, she'd be bawling her eyes out. Very touching story. In my mind the peeps were Goten and Marron.

omg that was soooooooooo sad!

this fic was one of the most touching i've had the honor to read...

no lemon... just pure romance

but i just want to know... who were the couple?

keep writing!

Beautiful but so work.

*sniff* beautiful. *sniff* simply sweet

that was so sad...

oh my god 'sob' where are my damn tissues 'sob sob' that was so sad

let me guess that couple was trunks and pan im not sure but if it was bra and goten that would be pretty scary since vegeta would dye before shaking someones hand..all in all it was cute but i hate the sad endings(no offence). But i liked it all the same

hey hey hey...this is sad! CAN IT BE JUUNANA PLEASE? good work

***( THAT WAS SO SAD!