Wouldn’t they go on feeding with no Patroni to stop them?
Should have eliminated Pet also so Bumblemore can’t try to send Harry back

Oh, I think Luna is such a whimsical, free spirit that nothing she has, wears, or does would surprise me ... unless it involved doing something that could not be classed as anything other than evil. (I don't think anything she did to Malfoy and his thugs was evil, considering their "plans" for her.)

Actually, I think Pansy has the right idea when it comes to managing Draco. I hope she continues her current methods, as they seem to have achieved good results.

See, Bumbles should died and Arthur would be alive

Please kill bumbles-please

Interesting concept. I think however if u were inclined this would have made a fantastic multiple hundred K word count story by expanding more on everything. Other than it being pretty bare bones detail wise I thought it was pretty good, except for the ending I hated that whole peace treaty deal, I think that was only done so u could get the story over quicker.

impunité malgré tous les crimes?

So Harry lost the case? He was the plaintiff, right?

Those were. Luna's best efforts? She couldn't simply write Dumbledore to replace the cup art the last second?

Less than 40k words is pretty short for a story spanning all seven books, it makes the story feel extremely abrupt, especially in the first half of the fic a lot of things is referred to but never truly explained, a lot of those background things such as the inner happenings in Slythering and Luna's experiences therein is never properly fleshed out.
I think it should either be expanded massively or it might work better as a longer oneshot
And the Ginny/Voldemort thing, let me just say eeew, it just comes out of nowhere. Didn't Luna travel back to make the world a better place for her friends instead she throws Ginny under the bus? Voldemort is mortal again, this isn't the time to make peace with him, but instead to find a solution for the Harry's scar, and to to hunt him down and erradicate him like the miserable snake mutant he is!

Nice

im sry but the ending is much too rushed even allowing for your writer's block. Also, from all of the characters' personalities, it seem pretty much ridiculous that Harry or even Ginny would let Voldemort live. You just wrote that most if not all the Death Eaters were killed and Riddle has no army left but now the D.A. just gives up?
Also, after knowing all the thousands of books if not millions, there is not a single way to remove the final horcruxe from Harry? And why would Riddle pick Ginny of all people? He doesn't know her, hasn't interacted with her before and there are many other women to chose from from Slytherin...

The whole oversexualized polygamous aspect of the Slytherin world is a real turn off to this story, at least with things like his own wife having him strapped down to be shared. Honestly, it ruined the story for someone like me- I don't dislike that sort of thing, but it feels really unromantic to put in a story tagged Luna/Harry.

Great Story but somewhat of a disappointing ending. However I feel about the ending I still wish to acknowledge and thank you for your efforts. Many have ideas but you are one of the wonderful people who can share your ides with others. We do appreciate that.

Thank you!

Finnish Harry's Harem, and give this a rewrite w/ Moldyshorts marring Millie and giving birth to a new race of orcs.