Great story. For being as short as it was you were able to get everything across in a good time and not seem to rush anything. I was a little tossed at first with Emily being there, just didn’t seem like her scene especially with Luke and Lori leaving but for their house needed.

Beautiful! This was so lovely, thanks :)

dude, this so totally is not a M story. probably not even T. good stuff though.

great story. short but it works.

CONGRATULATIONS on writing Your VERY ROMANTIC Paris & Rory story! Paris expressed Her Feelings for Rory VERY BEAUTIFULLY! Rory's response to Paris is VERY PRECIOUS! You are an AMAZING Writer!

AWESOME! Is there a sequel? Anyways thanks for the awesome read, can't wait to read your future fanfics XD!

You can't possibly continue this fic. in a multi-chaptered sequel can you? X]

I run a c2 community for gilmore girls slash, can I add this story?

aw! that was a awesome little fic! )

Yowza. That was, without doubt, the most beautifully well written fan fiction I have read that was in the M rated theme. I'm so breath-taken, I probably need to be resucitated. :)

Q-n-P

Wow that was great! So cute.

thats so sweet! i love it! :)

~Liz

great story;; u have nothing 2 worry about u kept the character personalities unchanged ;; if u need a beta reader dont b afraid to ask by the way please continue the story it was really gd

Wow this was NICE i loved it... you should make a squeal tell me what they do next ! keep writing !

XOXOXX

came upon it by chance but its an awesome story!

i agree rory's 21st bday need spice...if this had happen i would have been really happy...thans for recreating the magic in a superb fanfic!

~carica