| Reviews for Concentration |
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  kkry2igmail.com chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 Very poetic. |
 shenweiyangtze chapter 1 . 3/25/2009 Good! But why so short? More please. _ |
| SonofLuffy chapter 1 . 8/21/2008 great so far |
| DaRkApple chapter 1 . 8/15/2008 I like it and will read on if you write more |
| Neko Noke chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 While I was hoping for a lemon in all this, I have to say this is really amazing work! I found few spelling mistakes and over all, it was a great story! Lets give a round of appluase! Good work! |
| Child of the Dragon chapter 1 . 9/14/2007 DAMNIT! Ya know, I thought I could just come here and be quick about finding this story to read...but no! you had to go and be all "NO FULL SEX SCENE FOR YOU!" Fine, see if I EVER write you Elricest...::sulks off to your DA page to go hunt the full fic down:: |
| PoisonAndCinderella chapter 1 . 8/22/2006 ok i love this. you are an amazing writer and i envy and admire you for being such a great writer. x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x awh i really want the rest! please i will love you forever! |
| WhenDeathMeetsYou chapter 1 . 5/18/2006 This is really good. Even with there not being much to it, it seems really good. |
| AoyagicestHime chapter 1 . 3/21/2006 so far so good _ keep up the good work! |
| ravemastaj chapter 1 . 3/16/2006 SO USE THOSE HIPS YOU DOLT! |
| edelric chapter 1 . 2/24/2006 ILIKED IT! BUT DUDE! WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT FOR! WERE BROTHERS DAMMIT! |
| Neko42 chapter 1 . 2/20/2006 kya! it's so cool! can i get the full version? |
| cookies worst nightmare chapter 1 . 2/16/2006 this is good, I wanna read the full version. |
| sesshy's 'lil stalker chapter 1 . 2/12/2006 Very nice! The first thing Al wants to do is his brother! That's awsome! A new chapter soon please? |
| UKELICIOUS chapter 1 . 2/8/2006 Wow, sounds good. *eyes glitter* Plz, u must email this try to me! I am begging u! My email is I am begging u on my knees! *is seriously on her knees* plz! I must see the full-version! i'll go cra-Z if i dont! |
