Really love it! I'm so excited to read the first chapter of mark of a goddess. You know what, I really love the way it was written. Plot was well written, great characterization and has interesting story about the tarot users and their power. This is one of my favorite stories.

Also, thanks for answering my inquiry. Really looking forward to read the first book. I'm really curious on how the story begins and how van and hitomi met.

I'm reading chapter 10 and couldn't help but love the whole plot. However, I have so many questions and it wouldn't be answered if I don't read dragon's moon. I really like to read it to satisfy my curiosity and understand this more. Hope you can give me the link on where I can read the first book. Please, I really like to read it. Definitely, interesting and well written. Good job!

Great storytelling, as usual. Your best moments are the "otherworldly" ones when someone's under an influence or in a situation they don't understand. I always enjoy H running into D because she usually ends up having something weird and disorienting happen to her and that's when you cut loose, let go of the stage directions, and really start to write like an artist. You can trust yourself to do that more and more when simply mapping out the plot too. The bits with Hitomi's family can get tiresome. It's too real and break up the fantastical tone and direction of the story. They're kind of like hurdles to clear before we can get back to what we were enjoying about the story. It's not that the moments between H and her father aren't realistic - it's that they're too realistic, or something. I'm glad for the changes in the family stuff the next draft of this. We'll talk more later.

The line about the "museum" was really good.

What the hell! Celena's pregnant!

Your last lines are always so catchy. Great ending to a great story! I have got to read the epilogue now.

"Then came the heat Hitomi had been waiting for, and she melted." This is such a beautiful line. I totally loved the part when Van was talking to himself. It made him seem more human who has flaws instead of someone who's always so strong.

This is definitely one of the best chapters yet. The revelations shocked the hell out of me and I'm really wondering who the Sun God is...Is it Chid? I mean he's kinda like the only kid in Escaflowne...

The symbolisms you used for this chapter is amazing. Dryden really amuses me!

I'm really wondering whether Allen and Marlene will end up together. Damn, Allen is a huge cradle robber.

I knew it! Folken's the counselor and the way you described the vocalist of the electronic band fit Folken perfectly! Anyways, his character is really interesting!

Honestly, Marlene freaks me out.

The guidance counselor seems really mysterious. I also love the part when you mentioned that the kids inside the detention room were looking at Hitomi like she was their god. That totally cracked me up!

I'm glad that I have finally gotten the time to read this second book of your story. It's really good and I don't know why but those blue roses are sweet! I love how the wedding was so unconventional and how you described Van's appearance.

Oh, and the epic story between Allen and Marlene starts...