Very interesting format. Thanks for sharing.

good, well written

Another excelent one!

Impressive. Nothing like getting a shot of John Sheppard's mind. I liked the flow and dynamic.

WOW! I am speechless...so glad you are on this side...BEAUTIFUL...and not too wordy, but perfect!

I like it. It wasn't too 'wordy'. I found it very clever and a good in-depth look at John's opinions on Teyla and Elizabeth.

Wow! That was so beautiful! I love how you captured the feeling of Ferris wheels. And how you made John seem poetic. Lovely. Just lovely.

OH SO VERY VERY GOOD. Seriously, the introspective was so beautiful. Wonderful work, keep writing.

Wow. Thank you for sharing that wonderful fic. It had such a different feel to it from other fics out there. The over riding atmosphere of the fic seemed sad, but also positive at the same time. Really interesting.

Wow, I really enjoyed this fic. It's a really different take than what I'm used to reading, but it's very refreshing that way. Thank you.

Oh my!...I'm speechless...I don't know what to say. That was absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what else you right for this ship...

-Witchy-

What do I say...I am speechless...this introspective Shep has an endearing quality about him that draws you into his very mind...

The quotes of poetry...such as "we will not go gently into that good night" was mesmerizing in this piece.

I also grasp your understanding of Shep and must give you compliments on your ability to put everything that happens in the series into one package, making Shep all the more real.