I would definitly pee myself if you continued with a Chapter 6. It would make my life. (:

After reading 80% of your stories, this is definitely the one you should update. It needs an ending very badly.

Please update, mannn. This is too good to be left like that.

This was very dark. I liked the background that led up to the event. Even though it was a horrendous place to stop I enjoyed reading it. Albel struggled with being a good character in Star Ocean and even then he wasn;t really good. This story dives into his tainted side.

... this was such a well-thought out and enjoyable story...

why did you stop it? ; ; if there was one story i could convince you to continue, IT WOULD BE THIS ONE! TT

GREAT STORY BUT PLEASE UPDATE IF YOU'RE STILL READING THIS REVIEW! IT'S SUCH A GREAT STORY!

damn that is cool although i kinda hated the whole gey scene with albel and the voice. anyways albel is perfect for the job of being the apocalypse although you just blurted out the one who will bring him down along with nel.

ps: if you dont want me to spoil it plz reply and i will tell you there so no one can read it later.

uh-oh! continue! :) _

you should write a lemon with the other side of Albel controlling him while he and Nel do it. ;

Wow, this is quite intense, i wonder whats going to happen next...

I absolutely adore this chapter. Keep up the good work.

I must say these chapters are getting better. I look foward to the next one.

Another amazing chapter! I really love your fictions. Albel and Nel are perfectly in character and the plot is very intriguing. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story plays out. Keep up the great work!

Ahh! Cliffy…*breath, breath* Gr…*exhale* whoa, I think I’ll be okay now. XD

I don’t know if I want Nel to remember what happened or not. I want her on his side and to understand what’s going on, but that might be asking too much. And now Albel’s off to face this thing? Oh I love the suspense, the fic – all of it!

‘The perfect day to begin anew. Don’t you think so, dear heart?’ – that leaves a lot for me to wonder about… until the next update I can assure you that my imagination will be thinking of several different scenarios.

(Dramatic Music) Dun, what will happen next?

I sure wants to know, so update fast!