Apparently you never got around to the sequel, pity, I'd have liked to read it.

Loving the story! Everyone in character, great plot!

I think you do have a continuity issue. ... chapter 12 had Lorne and Elizabeth together, captured. Then in 13 Lorne pops our and grabs Rodney, and neither of them knows where a Elizabeth is.

Small problem to fix... great story!

Just reread this lovely tale! Not sure if you kept your promise about a sequel...don't remember reading one?...but I will definitely go check your site! This stoey was excellent...well written and full of all the right things! Your characterizations are spot-on! Loved it! Esp John /Carson trust issues...please write more SGA !

Fantastic story and well-written! You have a nice easy flow to your writing and I love the snark and the sentiment and the relationships which are all canon to the series! Great job!

Nice story

This was great. I just finished reading it and went back to favorite it. I will admit that you have given me some ideas for some of my own stories. So thanks for the "things that make you go hmmm"!

Oh, man! This sentence, “Unbidden, he thought of his two very unsuccessful attempts to fight the Beast.”, just caused me to have an epiphany (please, pardon the pun). The time dilation field is Hotel California!

Ok, the end bit had me laughing my ass off! So funny! *sigh* that was all I really had to say

This is a great story... Thank you for this.. Is there already a sequel to this?.. I love SGA, and its cast.. Keep writing.. )

What a fantastic story! I realize you wrote this a few years ago, but I barely found it. Now, I'm going to have to go back and read ALL of your Carson stories. :D

As for this one, though, I totally enjoyed it. I liked how you chose a unique person to invade Atlantis (being vague for anyone who reads reviews) rather than the typical Genii. And the dialogue was perfect. Punchy, humorous, but still incredibly in character.

Great job! Definitely one for the favorites list!

Hi! Is there still a sequel to this? I really enjoy stories that give characters (especially John) abilities. I hope you decide to continue with this.

Great story XDD

Most of all th Sensational story at sheppard have to be able to telekinetic talent_

Now I expect the continuation Please Don't forget it :( is my favorite

That you will have glided Ba'al for sheppard

Himself that a fic is of last year but I hope that you consider him and write the consequence

Forgive my bad English :)

ooh, very interesting. Great story

Great fic! Well balanced with whumpalicious Sheppard, snarky McKay, angsted Beckett, and worried Weir.

I had so many favorite parts I can't write them down, just know that I loved the entire fic.

Thanks for sharing this with me.

Wow what an interesting story! I am certainly glad I found it as I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it as this one was very original.